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Steelie 8
‘Right, that’s it,’ growled DI Griffin. ‘You’ve taken the piss wance too often. I’m taking you in.’ He muttered to himself while searching behind his...
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Steelie 7
‘Ur there any spirits wae us?’ Steelie’s voice barely more than a whisper. The planchette shivered, and pieces of cardboard marked with letter and...
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Steelie 6
He leaned forward, the ink from the Racing news and rough wood of the table digging into his forearms. A nimbus of light seemed to drift and spread...
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Steelie 5
Brodie’s breath smelled of stale whisky. He glinted at him with darkened eyes. ‘How did you know my mum’s name was Martha?’ The quarter-gill glass...
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Steelie 4
Steelie nudged him. ‘Get another round in. Tae even think of Cockeyed Bill’s stink’s making me boak.’ Brodie’s eyes felt heavy. He hadn’t drunk...
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Kicked up a gear. Her turning
Posted on Mon, 16 Jun 2014
Kicked up a gear. Her turning on him is good, but maybe express some of the doubts about Ian earlier. A kind of layering effect. His violence towards her is a good way of keeping it real.
Read full commentPosted in Ch26: Stolen July 12th part 2
silence, is often a pause
Posted on Sat, 31 May 2014
silence, is often a pause before the encore.
Read full commentPosted in War of Sounds
a small word stress. It lies
Posted on Sun, 23 Nov 2025
a small word stress. It lies flat on the page. ‘swallowing the sun as a dwarf star’. Well, wonderful words.
Read full commentPosted in Curiosity is the Only Requirement
Hair today, gone tomorrow.
Posted on Fri, 21 Nov 2025
Hair today, gone tomorrow. Well, in my case that's true. Your memories hold true.
Read full commentPosted in Drama Of Pheromones
it's a grand old fuck up of a
Posted on Fri, 21 Nov 2025
it's a grand old fuck up of a time when time didn't matter so much.
Read full commentPosted in The Discharge
I guess in the end I thought
Posted on Mon, 17 Nov 2025
I guess in the end I thought she'd be saved. No matter. All her good deeds. She'll get to heaven.
Read full commentPosted in The Day She Chose to Be Good
maybe turlough. maybe.
Posted on Sun, 16 Nov 2025
maybe turlough. maybe.
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full of colour and broken
Posted on Sun, 16 Nov 2025
full of colour and broken glass.
Read full commentPosted in My Dinosaur Era Chapter 22
Absolutely. For Fairy Cake
Posted on Fri, 14 Nov 2025
Absolutely. For Fairy Cake read Crunchies. Faires eat then too. So they must be true.
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trippple
Posted on Tue, 11 Nov 2025
trippple like tipple. More than one. Like a burn to the sea or see?
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