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My stories

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My dead diary - parties

By rjnewlyn on Sun, 13 Nov 2011

A story with 200-word episodes. In which there is much drinking and inappropriate behaviour but not very much plot.
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My dead diary - beginnings

By rjnewlyn on Thu, 03 Nov 2011

A story of sorts in 200-word episodes. In which the dead diary is begun and our narrator feels he ought to get out more.
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Cherry

If you meet me, have some sympathy 26

By rjnewlyn on Wed, 19 Oct 2011

A story in 200-word episodes. In which an angel and devil begin a beautiful friendship.
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If you meet me, have some sympathy 25

By rjnewlyn on Sat, 08 Oct 2011

A story in 200 word episodes. In which two devils have a fight in cyberspace (or is it?) and one of them loses.
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If you meet me, have some sympathy 24

By rjnewlyn on Fri, 30 Sep 2011

A story in 200-word episodes. In which our infernal hero meets his infernal nemesis and messes up someone's council flat.
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39 of my comments have received 41 Great Feedback votes

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Well done

Posted on Thu, 29 Dec 2016

Very good. Nicely paced, about the right length and good comic timing.

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Posted in Brightest and Best of the Sons of the Mourning?

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Beautiful

Posted on Sun, 07 Feb 2016

I really liked this episode - has a powerful atmosphere. Depends what you want to do with it, but I'd suggest having a re-read to iron out some typos and minor quirks. These are the ones I happened to notice and should be easily fixable (although...

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Posted in The Baobab Tree (2)

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Very good - one of your best,

Posted on Tue, 17 Feb 2015

Very good - one of your best, I think. Says all sorts of things in so little time.

Rob

 

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Posted in His Father's Eyes

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Yes, very good

Posted on Sun, 31 Aug 2014

An interesting and well-written piece. Feels as if there are other chapters to come (I hope so).

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Posted in Forest of Eden - Part One- A New Beginning

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Welcome to ABCtales and I

Posted on Sun, 08 Dec 2013

Welcome to ABCtales and I hope you keep posting. You write well and there's a nice flow to this. It feels quite unremittingly bleak, but everyone has their own preferences. I guess you might want to work a little on the overall arc of the story...

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Posted in Recovery

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