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Don't Think I Do (poetry monthly)

By Bee on Tue, 08 Mar 2016

Love is... but this isn't.

Humour

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Distancing

By Bee on Sat, 05 Mar 2016

Miscellaneous

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Flanked

By Bee on Tue, 01 Mar 2016

Day surgery...

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Buzzed Off

By Bee on Thu, 25 Feb 2016

https://youtu.be/8CaY97M_gp8 Our hair means a lot to us girls, whether we style, colour, or just pin it up out of the way, it is an expression of our...

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Nicely developed, Tina. So

Posted on Sat, 26 Dec 2015

Nicely developed, Tina. So often people have an us and them attitude, but it's just us without a roof - for such a multitude of reasons. For me you showed this so well in your poem.

Posted in The Guy Pushing Big Issue

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I like the repetitions, but I

Posted on Fri, 25 Dec 2015

I like the repetitions, but I felt that some of the rhymes were a little forced perhaps - for convenience - eg. the 'you know' in 'they're sending men back to the Khyber you know.' And should there be a apostrophe in Jehovah's as in the people...

Posted in Like a Little Candle

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Lovely and full of hope.

Posted on Mon, 14 Dec 2015

Lovely and full of hope.

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Wonderfully quick and witty

Posted on Wed, 09 Dec 2015

Wonderfully quick and witty with a stab at the end. Everything in the right order as it should be - wish it could be. It would be great to find a cure for terminal apathy - sometimes I think I've got that... Ah well..., but I don't think you can...

Posted in This Isn't a Dummy Run...

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Been reading this again - it

Posted on Tue, 08 Dec 2015

Been reading this again - it's very moving.

Posted in Free (Poetry monthly)

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Lovely.

Posted on Mon, 07 Dec 2015

Lovely.

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Heartbreaking, yet inspiring,

Posted on Fri, 04 Dec 2015

Heartbreaking, yet inspiring, Tina. Such comfort to be found in being able to make these important plans and to have someone open to share them with. Some comfort in knowing you were that one, though tough at the time.

Posted in Preparing to Meet Your Goliath

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I like this Marcia. You could

Posted on Thu, 03 Dec 2015

I like this Marcia. You could just add poetry monthly to the title and look as Rhiannon suggested. It fits. Very skyish and eye darty.

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Good how you got all those

Posted on Thu, 03 Dec 2015

Good how you got all those titles in.

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I liked this story a lot, and

Posted on Wed, 02 Dec 2015

I liked this story a lot, and enjoyed the way it was written, but I thought the end was a little weak. Like, how would they know he'd take them there - he could have gone down any chip shop? Just my thinking. And then again, he mightn't have...