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For my sweet little bird, Custard RiP
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First Tattoo and First Attempt at Shoplifting
The today in my story was yesterday, cos that's when I wrote it. And my thanks for reading. Bee x
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The Time Saver's Wife
Reasons
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The Last Song Sung
For 'Custard' - who I hand reared from a new hatched chick eighteen years ago. She's not been well the past few days - here's hoping she'll soon get well.
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The Time Saver's son
Last note
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'rain is coming down in
Posted on Fri, 26 Feb 2016
'rain is coming down in elevators,' I like that, and the chicken Licken fear factor is well drawn. But I think you'll find the sky is falling down on our heads. Wish it was an acorn... Or is it?
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So much locked away in this -
Posted on Thu, 25 Feb 2016
So much locked away in this - full of hope, and I loved 'stalwart trees'. Beautiful poem.
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Posted on Thu, 18 Feb 2016
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I was always accused of being
Posted on Fri, 19 Feb 2016
I was always accused of being antisocial as a child, and until I left home - always in my room, reading, or playing my guitar, while everyone downstairs squabbled whilst watching tv. But as you say, they slept at night.
I love the way...
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The images are so clear and
Posted on Mon, 15 Feb 2016
The images are so clear and femininely demonic, full of hidden threat and self accusation, like he'd be a better person if he didn't harbour such a devious mistress. But that she's there for him in all those quaintly infuriating poses and guises...
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Sometimes the burdens weigh
Posted on Thu, 18 Feb 2016
Sometimes the burdens weigh too heavy and we are forced to allow others to not only lift our load, but provide needed and appropriate care. It takes humility to let go of responsiblity sometimes, but how wonderful the sudden release of freedom,...
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I got how the regret is there
Posted on Thu, 18 Feb 2016
I got how the regret is there, but mostly cast aside in favour of reality. It made me cry reading. I guess so many of us have a story close to this one, and that's why the poem is so easy to relate to and make fit in with our own easily...
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Three nicely put together
Posted on Thu, 18 Feb 2016
Three nicely put together senryu, conjuring great images.
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I don't know what else to say
Posted on Wed, 17 Feb 2016
I don't know what else to say, but yes, how lovely! Has she read it?
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What a relief to have that
Posted on Wed, 17 Feb 2016
What a relief to have that good news. This is war! I love the fighting spirit, and I wish you ... well, I don't even know what it is I wish you - but I wish you buckets of it. And much as this was great to read for the good news part, I thought...
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