Wonderfully quick and witty with a stab at the end. Everything in the right order as it should be - wish it could be. It would be great to find a cure for terminal apathy - sometimes I think I've got that... Ah well..., but I don't think you can...
Heartbreaking, yet inspiring, Tina. Such comfort to be found in being able to make these important plans and to have someone open to share them with. Some comfort in knowing you were that one, though tough at the time.
I liked this story a lot, and enjoyed the way it was written, but I thought the end was a little weak. Like, how would they know he'd take them there - he could have gone down any chip shop? Just my thinking. And then again, he mightn't have...
Lovely and full of hope.
Posted on Mon, 14 Dec 2015
Lovely and full of hope.
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Wonderfully quick and witty
Posted on Wed, 09 Dec 2015
Wonderfully quick and witty with a stab at the end. Everything in the right order as it should be - wish it could be. It would be great to find a cure for terminal apathy - sometimes I think I've got that... Ah well..., but I don't think you can...
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Been reading this again - it
Posted on Tue, 08 Dec 2015
Been reading this again - it's very moving.
Read full commentPosted in Free (Poetry monthly)
Lovely.
Posted on Mon, 07 Dec 2015
Lovely.
Read full commentPosted in Green moon haiku set
Heartbreaking, yet inspiring,
Posted on Fri, 04 Dec 2015
Heartbreaking, yet inspiring, Tina. Such comfort to be found in being able to make these important plans and to have someone open to share them with. Some comfort in knowing you were that one, though tough at the time.
Read full commentPosted in Preparing to Meet Your Goliath
I like this Marcia. You could
Posted on Thu, 03 Dec 2015
I like this Marcia. You could just add poetry monthly to the title and look as Rhiannon suggested. It fits. Very skyish and eye darty.
Read full commentPosted in look away ..... .... ... .. . . . . . ."Poetry Monthly"
Good how you got all those
Posted on Thu, 03 Dec 2015
Good how you got all those titles in.
Read full commentPosted in The Eagles And Me
I liked this story a lot, and
Posted on Wed, 02 Dec 2015
I liked this story a lot, and enjoyed the way it was written, but I thought the end was a little weak. Like, how would they know he'd take them there - he could have gone down any chip shop? Just my thinking. And then again, he mightn't have...
Read full commentPosted in You'd Better Watch Out
This poem starts for me on
Posted on Tue, 01 Dec 2015
This poem starts for me on line three. A sweet expression of love.
Read full commentPosted in Falling
Love the continuation of her
Posted on Sun, 29 Nov 2015
Love the continuation of her life. Lovely description with wistful feeling behind it all.
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