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Posted on Tue, 15 Nov 2016

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A valiant effort, Ed. I love

Posted on Thu, 10 Nov 2016

A valiant effort, Ed. I love leather cloth, cackle stones sea dust double you wig gods, it's rich and the rhythm is poetic. You can argue the toss over what stacks up as poetry for eternity, the piece is inventive and its cryptic elements engage...

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Posted in The Leather-Cloth Wars (Poetry Monthly)

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What a mythical treat. I

Posted on Mon, 07 Nov 2016

What a mythical treat. I adore the story of Boreas. Some delicate language, very escapist and seasonal now that cold's setting in.

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Posted in Winter Fantasia

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I have read and seen the film

Posted on Tue, 01 Nov 2016

I have read and seen the film. It's tricky to get my head round the slang but I think it's great that you have focused on something really quite complex to do and interpret a modern social slant on it. Well done.

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Posted in A videsat from Alex

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This is so film like - the

Posted on Sat, 15 Oct 2016

This is so film like - the mise-en-scène manages to sequence the internal and external aspects of mental health and addiction with a colourful brevity. It's such a striking piece of work.

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Posted in Branwell Clinic

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A lovely adaptation with a

Posted on Fri, 21 Oct 2016

A lovely adaptation with a gentle humour.

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Posted in Owl and the Pussycat

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This is so moving with its

Posted on Wed, 31 Aug 2016

This is so moving with its collision of colour against horror.

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Posted in The Grief of Gaziantep.

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Posted on Fri, 12 Aug 2016

 I love this,but feel you repeat the same sounds from verse one to three.Feel it reduces impact. Do say if it is deliberate.

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Posted in Coffee Moon Haiku Set

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A powerful piece, Lev. Some

Posted on Wed, 10 Aug 2016

A powerful piece, Lev. Some of the dialogue feels expository, perhaps some backstory could reduce the need to give reason for ending it via the incident.Actions rather than words. See what you think.

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Posted in End of the line

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Some strong description of

Posted on Sat, 30 Jul 2016

Some strong description of texture and setting. In places the colloquial voice felt at odds with the rather formal description, perhaps keep an eye on that.

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Posted in A Midsummer Night's Blitz (London)

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