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It must be unspeakably
Posted on Wed, 16 Nov 2016
It must be unspeakably difficult. I think of you and Bee so often. The lioness metaphor is gorgeous, a stark contrast with the stilted climate of neglect in the final stanza. The voice of care and caution lives on.
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Posted on Tue, 15 Nov 2016
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A valiant effort, Ed. I love
Posted on Thu, 10 Nov 2016
A valiant effort, Ed. I love leather cloth, cackle stones sea dust double you wig gods, it's rich and the rhythm is poetic. You can argue the toss over what stacks up as poetry for eternity, the piece is inventive and its cryptic elements engage...
Read full commentPosted in The Leather-Cloth Wars (Poetry Monthly)
What a mythical treat. I
Posted on Mon, 07 Nov 2016
What a mythical treat. I adore the story of Boreas. Some delicate language, very escapist and seasonal now that cold's setting in.
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I have read and seen the film
Posted on Tue, 01 Nov 2016
I have read and seen the film. It's tricky to get my head round the slang but I think it's great that you have focused on something really quite complex to do and interpret a modern social slant on it. Well done.
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This is so film like - the
Posted on Sat, 15 Oct 2016
This is so film like - the mise-en-scène manages to sequence the internal and external aspects of mental health and addiction with a colourful brevity. It's such a striking piece of work.
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A lovely adaptation with a
Posted on Fri, 21 Oct 2016
A lovely adaptation with a gentle humour.
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This is so moving with its
Posted on Wed, 31 Aug 2016
This is so moving with its collision of colour against horror.
Read full commentPosted in The Grief of Gaziantep.
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Posted on Fri, 12 Aug 2016
I love this,but feel you repeat the same sounds from verse one to three.Feel it reduces impact. Do say if it is deliberate.
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A powerful piece, Lev. Some
Posted on Wed, 10 Aug 2016
A powerful piece, Lev. Some of the dialogue feels expository, perhaps some backstory could reduce the need to give reason for ending it via the incident.Actions rather than words. See what you think.
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