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Not All Pianos Have 88 Keys
10th March 2025 Dear Jon, It has been an age since we spoke way back in the wilderness of Covid. I write from a proper desk this time, not some...
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Please Follow My Instructions ( For This You Will Need a Blood Orange)
i) There is a blood orange on the table but it is not for eating. Citrus sinensis. Blood oranges are the result of a spontaneous genetic mutation...
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A wild take on fhe sun. You
Posted on Tue, 07 Oct 2025
A wild take on fhe sun. You still do these well, Rhiannon.
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When sleep is outside of
Posted on Mon, 06 Oct 2025
When sleep is outside of night it brings the surreal with it, like your poem has. That last verse is a beautiful balance, the tempo quietening, as the storm recedes. Beautiful.
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I am another of these women
Posted on Sun, 29 Oct 2017
I am another of these women and I hear you. The repetition has a profound effect on the build of abuse and then a destabilising one in its close. Felt very emotional reading this. It feels like looking out on a clean still morning with a blue sky...
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Loss is inexplicable and yet
Posted on Tue, 04 Apr 2017
Loss is inexplicable and yet airyfairy manages to pin down the dislocation and vulnerability of the unspeakable with beauty, compassion and carefully placed humour. It's our Pick of the Day. (and thinking of you)
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Sometimes a place gives
Posted on Tue, 31 Jan 2017
Sometimes a place gives fabulous journeys to our internal psyche and your poem did for me, it gave me a clarity that's hard to articulate and that sense of being almost near-to-knowing the self, a temporal sensation that's never linear or pinned...
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This is so attractive for its
Posted on Fri, 03 Feb 2017
This is so attractive for its plain speaking and also, each line is exceptionally tight despite that colloquial tone.
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Such a crock that scent and
Posted on Fri, 18 Nov 2016
Such a crock that scent and taste invoke a person (I used to eat things I hated to feel close to somebody!) but there's definitely something in the ceremony of opening their favourite bottle.
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I thought this was inventive
Posted on Thu, 17 Nov 2016
I thought this was inventive and beautiful, Catherine. It's rural and plump. I dont think kennings have to be easily identifiable, part of the historic interest was in the new sounds and what was gained in the process of deconstruction. You can...
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The coastal imagery combined
Posted on Thu, 17 Nov 2016
The coastal imagery combined with history and the fable are intriguing. A really well spun story so far and I hope there might be more.
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It must be unspeakably
Posted on Wed, 16 Nov 2016
It must be unspeakably difficult. I think of you and Bee so often. The lioness metaphor is gorgeous, a stark contrast with the stilted climate of neglect in the final stanza. The voice of care and caution lives on.
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