The weather and other remedies

By queen beatle
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At the storm's navel, I surface
from a nap not chosen—
my tongue a rum-dried apricot,
my lips a shallow spit.
Heard swirls into seen—
a downpour, hatched
at midday, yellow-dark
and crawling up the door.
I recognise nothing,
having taken sense
into a dream
and dropped it at the pass,
until a silhouette
unfurls from an ember
to watch her courgette plants
shrug off the curling water.
Lightning — a conduit.
Along the back row,
other windows: lights
and other faces.
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dead of night
Brilliant, I wake up too in the dead of night with "my tongue a rum-dried apricot, my lips a shallow spit", having taken sense into a dream".
Well done Morwenna, your poems never cease to amaze me! Tom
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When sleep is outside of
When sleep is outside of night it brings the surreal with it, like your poem has. That last verse is a beautiful balance, the tempo quietening, as the storm recedes. Beautiful.
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