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I like this for the way it
Posted on Thu, 30 Mar 2017
I like this for the way it shows that domestic violence is no respecter of class or money, and that violence distorts human relationships. Claire may be staying in the marriage for reasons other than love,and no-one would blame her for getting...Read full comment
Posted in Mum, when?
Really liked the effect of
Posted on Fri, 20 Jan 2017
Really liked the effect of the rhythm and rhyme. They express the desperate way so many turn to all sorts of notions to give structure to the world. The last stanza captures the calm of those who have found their own answers.Read full comment
Posted in Superstitions’ Grip
I'm fascinated by this.
Posted on Fri, 06 Jan 2017
I'm fascinated by this. There's shades of Doctor Moreau, and the dialogue is very evocative of time and place. I think it needs a bit of editing - it's a bit too wordy in places and you lose the pace. But it's well worth the effort...Read full comment
Posted in Moon Over the Monkey's Back, Part 3