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293 of my comments have received 300 Great Feedback votes

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I don't really agree with

Posted on Mon, 06 Jun 2016

I don't really agree with Phineas on this.  I thought the acceptance of the existence of vampires was an interesting take on a well-known theme, a bit akin to the way Alien Nation or the recent Aliens TV series postulated a world where aliens...

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Posted in Sangreville

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Explosive ending - oh no, not

Posted on Wed, 08 Jun 2016

Explosive ending - oh no, not Marc!  You capture the grubbiness and seediness of power play, and the sadness of the individual lives destroyed on all sides.  This has been a really gripping and enjoyable story.

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Posted in EBOLOWA 44

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Lovely little scene.  The

Posted on Sat, 21 May 2016

Lovely little scene.  The dialogue is cracking, as always.

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Posted in Bring Out Your Dead - Part 15 (Revised)

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Loved it!  Laughed out loud

Posted on Fri, 13 May 2016

Loved it!  Laughed out loud at the detectives.  Can't wait to see the next lot of trouble!

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Posted in Bring Out Your Dead - Part 14

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You tell that Freddy where to

Posted on Tue, 10 May 2016

You tell that Freddy where to go.

 ​I loved the description of your childhood efforts to stay awake, and the skilful way you marry them up with your present situation.  I hope you had a great day at the ballpark.

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Posted in Resistance and Rejuvenation

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Lovely to see this back. 

Posted on Tue, 10 May 2016

Lovely to see this back.  Good set up for this chapter - very interested to see how the resourceful Chantelle resolves her problem!

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Posted in Bring Out Your Dead - Part 13

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I really enjoyed this.  It's

Posted on Sun, 08 May 2016

I really enjoyed this.  It's a cliche to say 'we've all been there', and maybe not exactly in that way, but the emotions are so recognisable, and the remedies, with personal variations, are pretty universal.  The bit about social media made me...

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Posted in Tara

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Really interesting, the sick

Posted on Sun, 08 May 2016

Really interesting, the sick but not-feeling-sick perspective.  Good to know that your writing is helping you through this.  Please keep posting the updates!

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The strands all coming

Posted on Mon, 28 Mar 2016

The strands all coming together and it is still well controlled - the reader feels confident that you have command of the plot! (Not always the case with thrillers).  Marc has a real depth of character - I like the way you present the loving...

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Posted in EBOLOWA 34

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The opening paragraphs of

Posted on Thu, 08 Oct 2015

The opening paragraphs of this chapter are absolutely splendid writing.  For me, Marc is the most vivid of all the characters.  The bit about the hip being a pestle and mortar is particularly striking.

Also another development in this...

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