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309 of my comments have received 316 Great Feedback votes

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I'm not a fan of the Family,

Posted on Mon, 18 Apr 2016

I'm not a fan of the Family, but I felt for her son, posing for 'that' picture.  Choosing between the symbolism of doing it and the symbolism of not.  Whatever the perks, I wouldn't fancy life as a signifier.

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Posted in A Life in Tabloid Pictures

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Interesting idea with lots of

Posted on Sun, 17 Apr 2016

Interesting idea with lots of detail -  is ths part of something longer or are you thinking of expanding it?  Lazlo sounds like a character with lots of potential for development before his sad demise.  Or was it his demise?  I think there were...

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Posted in A Trip to Edinburgh

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Particularly liked the

Posted on Wed, 13 Apr 2016

Particularly liked the portrayal of the relationship between George and Mary - very moving.  I find the way you are introducing the characters very interesting - they appear, with their own stories, as needed by the plot.  You haven't followed...

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Posted in Switchback. Ch9

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I like the way the poem's

Posted on Wed, 13 Apr 2016

I like the way the poem's structure emphasises the ambivalence, the simultaneous need for and fear of dependence.  The poem also makes you wonder about the dynamics of the relationship, and what the 'other half' thinks about it.  A good read. ...

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Posted in Some False Sense Of Security

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Perfumes are so evocative. 

Posted on Tue, 12 Apr 2016

Perfumes are so evocative.  For me Carven's Ma Griffe, if I ever catch a whiff of it, has a very similar effect.  Beautiful writing.

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Posted in 'Evening in Paris' (Poetry Monthly)

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Absolutely love the take on

Posted on Mon, 11 Apr 2016

Absolutely love the take on the IP, and the concept of the 'it' girl.  It's the simple things that often bring most satisfaction...

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Posted in The 'It' Girl

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The magic of the not quite

Posted on Thu, 07 Apr 2016

The magic of the not quite everyday.  'Listened to the last rays of the sun' - a wonderful image, and welcoming time as a warm cloak speaks of peace hard won.   A beautiful piece, Tina.

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Posted in Not Quite Fern Hill (Poetry Monthly)

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No, sorry, you have to finish

Posted on Tue, 05 Apr 2016

No, sorry, you have to finish it.  Soon as possible.  Please. 

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Posted in Crisp

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This is a really interesting

Posted on Thu, 24 Mar 2016

This is a really interesting read - I love the mix of fact and personal reminiscence.  I've never read 'A Kid For Two Farthings' but I remember seeing the film on telly years ago.   As far as I recall Diana Dors was in it - which sounds  unlikely...

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Posted in Unseen Britain - Whitechapel, Wolf Mankowitz, George Bernard Shaw

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I like the fact that there is

Posted on Mon, 21 Mar 2016

I like the fact that there is no compromise in this - it is a genuine shock when there is no rescue for Dawn.  The crows convey so well the sense of a primeval power at work, and I felt the story was at its best in the passages describing that...

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Posted in A gathering of crows part 2

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