Spring marches in Daffodils shine, rising like saints To the strong slow pulse Of the pale foggy sun. Sap rises, Life surprises Our budding, opening...
'You're wearing a suit and tie!' Mr Peter Francis Lockyer. Place of birth Exeter. Occupation student - scored out - new occupation travel broker. 'I...
Heat, cold, rise, fall Nature's seasonal colouring book.Rhiannon Subtle yet strong sound echoes of consonants and sometimes rhymed assonance to match the movement, like music and like Life itself with it's thrusting swish forward. I like It
If I am ever in Dundalk I guarantee you, Sean I shall visit the Train Station. At least twice. Mind you this year my priority is the Isle of Man. I mean it..Man. Keep going I like it. Happy New Year
I like this a lot. 'I scribble on,' the paper being the perfect companion. The last verse with its sharp ending is quite deep 'when I wasn't looking it stopped to rain.' and that's when the writer grows up ...
As always, good writing which illustrates the present, moves the story on efficiently and ends on the 'what next' cliffhanger. Like the car window writing. Give us the next episode please, I know CM and i are impatiently waiting.
I can picture you out there
Posted on Mon, 16 Jan 2017
I can picture you out there Rhiannon, driving through light dusty snow and splashy slush.
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Heat, cold, rise, fall Nature
Posted on Thu, 12 Jan 2017
Heat, cold, rise, fall Nature's seasonal colouring book.Rhiannon Subtle yet strong sound echoes of consonants and sometimes rhymed assonance to match the movement, like music and like Life itself with it's thrusting swish forward. I like It
Read full commentPosted in Earth Colours
Short and pretty, I like it.
Posted on Thu, 12 Jan 2017
Short and pretty, I like it.
Read full commentPosted in Starry Dreamers
If I am ever in Dundalk I
Posted on Sat, 31 Dec 2016
If I am ever in Dundalk I guarantee you, Sean I shall visit the Train Station. At least twice. Mind you this year my priority is the Isle of Man. I mean it..Man. Keep going I like it. Happy New Year
Read full commentPosted in CC 88: My Train Station is Better than Yours
These windows are beautiful.
Posted on Sat, 17 Dec 2016
These windows are beautiful.
Read full commentPosted in Window 17) A king riding a donkey
It's different and I can
Posted on Fri, 16 Dec 2016
It's different and I can understand what you are saying. Why did you choose this colour for the man?
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I like this a lot. 'I
Posted on Sat, 12 Nov 2016
I like this a lot. 'I scribble on,' the paper being the perfect companion. The last verse with its sharp ending is quite deep 'when I wasn't looking it stopped to rain.' and that's when the writer grows up ...
Read full commentPosted in Pure Inspiration
Freedom! Yes, that's what we
Posted on Fri, 09 Dec 2016
Freedom! Yes, that's what we need. Also love peace and equality. I like your poem.
Read full commentPosted in Colour Blind
Great description Rhiannon.
Posted on Wed, 30 Nov 2016
Great description Rhiannon. Scratchy is a good word.
Read full commentPosted in Frost and Sun
As always, good writing which
Posted on Fri, 25 Nov 2016
As always, good writing which illustrates the present, moves the story on efficiently and ends on the 'what next' cliffhanger. Like the car window writing. Give us the next episode please, I know CM and i are impatiently waiting.
BTW Sean...
Read full commentPosted in CC 73: Answers from the Hill
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