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Tom and Old Willie
Elsie meets her daughter for Bath-time fun. Who are the guys?
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Dave Swakeley is Dying
Dave Swakeley Of the London Hillingdon Estate Drank lager Grew Bitter. Bright lad Full of light and life Light feet on the field of football Dave...
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Fable
Sometimes the slow road is the best way to travel
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Humour - Wasting me foddle dee doddle dee time (nonsense rhyme for Poetry Monthly)
O me Facebook is fun – it is second to none With me flick-a-dee, click-a-dee dido. I post all me pictures of Saffron me puss And me pal Jenny’s...
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Good fun. I want some of that
Posted on Fri, 21 Oct 2016
Good fun. I want some of that fishy pie.
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I like It!
Posted on Tue, 18 Oct 2016
I like It!
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Rhiannon,I like the way this
Posted on Sat, 14 Mar 2015
Rhiannon,I like the way this has some of the Winnie-the-Pooh thoughtfulness and a view of the wider world too.
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Ooh, one of those fictional
Posted on Tue, 10 Mar 2015
Ooh, one of those fictional tales which seems almost too real. Saleable too, one to try the mags with. And yes Lindy this shower of so-called friends re-united say plenty!
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Alphadog, this is very
Posted on Wed, 11 Mar 2015
Alphadog, this is very physical without being crude. I like it.
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I like the mix of nature with
Posted on Sun, 08 Mar 2015
I like the mix of nature with your personal loss, Tina. The last verse is beautifully sensual and then the sad sharp end..
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Lovely bit of fun here Lindy
Posted on Sat, 21 Feb 2015
Lovely bit of fun here Lindy every Goth trick in the book, nice tongue in cheek treatment. You didn't let your assignment thwart you or suffuse you with chill dark.
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'Jealousy...women are women's
Posted on Tue, 17 Feb 2015
'Jealousy...women are women's biggest problem' there's certainly some truth in that, Blighter's.I have a young relative who has a slightly brash 'party-girl' image. Smiley,full of fun and also a first year student with the world at her feet....
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I often start sentences with
Posted on Wed, 28 Jan 2015
I often start sentences with 'and' for emphasis build-up. It can feel more effective than simply using it as a conjunction and is in keeping with the modern notion of giving your sentences varying lengths as it can introduce a short and sparky...
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You weave the reality of
Posted on Thu, 22 Jan 2015
You weave the reality of Sellafield and its impact on your stretch of the Irish coast very neatly into your story. I like your description of the river becoming old and frail too; a real sense of place here.
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