Before I Post Them
By Ray Schaufeld
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I like uncertainty of leaving
I like uncertainty of leaving behind, intentionally or by mistake. But, if i am thinking at knickers and vest that makes me think that was definitely a gift, a remember for good days Like it!
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I suspected you for those
I suspected you for those likes, from tracking system But you are always welcomed to write comments also for the sake of writting improvement.
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Loved your poem Elsie...put a
Loved your poem Elsie...put a smile on my face.
Jenny.
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Enjoyed the humour and form
Enjoyed the humour and form you've got this into Elsie.
Reminded me of the time my grandsons stayed while their Mum and Dad went off for a couple of days' walking in Wales, and just as Mum and Dad had driven off, the elder (and most forgetful) said, 'I can't find any socks'. He'd been told to do his own packing - a determined mother and teacher! So our first outing was to a cheapish 'factory shop' to get a pack! Rhiannon
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Thanks for making me smile,
Thanks for making me smile, elsie 'Senior moments'...ah yes, I know them well
Much enjoyed.
Tina
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Hi
Hi
What great fun this was to read. I suspected it was your daughter, and enjoy the little personal snippets from people's lives.
Jean
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Love this one Elsie, so real.
Love this one Elsie, so real. 'Knick knicks' brings back memories and made me smile!
Linda
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May I say your 'Behind'
May I say your 'Behind' sticks out a bit when you start that line with it, and interrupts the flow a bit. But I liked the humour of this piece. More power to your elbow!
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Mother has spoken.
Mother has spoken. Particularly liked the sense of your daughter moving away by train whilst you discover the smalls.
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