london_calling79

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I have 123 stories published in 8 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 329192 times and 167 of my stories have been cherry picked.
132 of my 1,386 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 134 votes

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Cherry

Little Buttons

Mixing paint and worry you bury memory soon to crouch in nooks of fabric matter ready for the future day to colour the new. Worry beads of sweat...
Cherry

Lines

burnt up and used out,

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132 of my comments have received 134 Great Feedback votes

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I would never have through to

Posted on Tue, 17 Feb 2015

I would never have thought to move so swiftly from the cheek to the tap but it does add a needed echo: a heartbeat.

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Posted in His Father's Eyes

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You tell stories so well

Posted on Mon, 16 Feb 2015

You tell stories so well through a series of pungent images.

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Posted in To a Cherry Tree

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Agree with insert.. here.

Posted on Tue, 27 Jan 2015

Agree with insert.. here. Pared down style works as there is no need to dress up this subject matter. It all still remains incomprehensible to me. I went to a holding camp in Prague and saw pictures drawn by children of smiling Nazi guards.

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Posted in Ashes

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Nice.

Posted on Mon, 19 Jan 2015

Nice.

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Posted in HD

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I enjoyed the symbolism here.

Posted on Sat, 20 Dec 2014

I enjoyed the symbolism here. A wall's a big thing and between the 'gathering darkness' and the 'inhumanity' your character makes a dent. I also appreciate your lack of adjectives describing the  wall. It would have been a bit cheap to try to...

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Posted in 25 Years After

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