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Trans Europe Express
We only crossed a tiny bit of Europe but in the time it took the train on which we were travelling to get from the city of Gorna Oryahovitsa in...
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When One Is One
When One Is One As our wee woman reaches one I wonder where the time has gone Those first twelve months so quickly passed As a list of skills you...
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502 Kilometres
502 Kilometres Just up the road from my wife and me A fire’s burning constantly Folks just like us are in the street No food to eat Nowhere to sleep...
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Her Troubles
Her Troubles Tuesday’s fish supper grease still lingers On grubby stubby stiff little fingers Cracked by cold and each one bleeds From overuse of...
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Elisabeth and the Bonbon Girls
Elisabeth and the Bonbon Girls Alone, I walked along the dusty path that led away from the termite-ravaged back gate of the small French colonial-...
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It's wonderful how you have
Posted on Mon, 20 Nov 2023
It's wonderful how you have written so many interesting facts about the fruit fly and its brain into a poem.
From now on, whenever I look at a fruit fly I'm sure I'll feel inadequate.
It's educational and enjoyable Rhiannon.
Read full commentPosted in What's going on inside?
Supermac's was closed then! I
Posted on Fri, 17 Nov 2023
Supermac's was closed then! I'm glad they had a good night out.
So what's next?
Read full commentPosted in May 4th (chapter 4)
It's very clever the way you
Posted on Fri, 17 Nov 2023
It's very clever the way you intermingled physical geography with human physical behaviour.
I think there's something special about mountains that brings out the best in us.
They certainly inspired you to write a very enjoyable poem...
Read full commentPosted in Analogy Of Adventure
The Polish poppy cake and the
Posted on Sat, 18 Nov 2023
The Polish poppy cake and the ability to control what happens in your dreams and hallucinations sound good to me.
However, I'm sorry you're having to endure all this treatment and I'm sorry I didn't wish you a happy birthday on the day....
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Three neat verses of good
Posted on Fri, 17 Nov 2023
Three neat verses of good advice that fit together extremely well.
The drawing impressed too. I never even managed to draw unemployment benefit.
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Congratulations Demo. A well
Posted on Sun, 12 Nov 2023
Congratulations Demo. A well deserved accolade.
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Possibly the first tanka I
Posted on Tue, 14 Nov 2023
Possibly the first tanka I have ever read. Interesting!
You have informed and inspired me.
Thank you very much.
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This is powerful stuff.
Posted on Thu, 16 Nov 2023
This is powerful stuff.
Every word and every thought hurts... I get it.
I hope you're okay.
Excellent writing. My kind of poem.
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Indeed it does.
Posted on Sat, 11 Nov 2023
Indeed it does.
I'm waiting up for it.
Read full commentPosted in May 4th (chapter 3 part 2)
I'm enjoying this more and
Posted on Tue, 14 Nov 2023
I'm enjoying this more and more with every episode. Good on you.
But Vanessa should tell her mum to avoid wearing flip flops as they encourage toe clawing. Shoes with a deep toe box will reduce the likelihood of friction on the dorsal...
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