Mark Say

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Story13 Don't You Step on my BluTacked Screws... Ewan52 years 1 month ago
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StoryZen and the Art of Calorie Counting purplehaze102 years 1 month ago
StoryBill or Bob? Turlough222 years 1 month ago
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StoryPulp Fiction mcmanaman32 years 1 month ago
StoryWhite Doors Mark Say82 years 1 month ago
StoryHer Troubles Turlough202 years 1 month ago
StoryMaglic Moments Turlough152 years 1 month ago
StoryThe Condemnation of Darkness Turlough82 years 1 month ago
StoryA Hot Afternoon in Malki Chiflik Turlough92 years 1 month ago
StorySean Happens. celticman192 years 2 months ago
StoryInvitation to a Cocktail Waitress Ewan22 years 3 months ago
StoryIn A Troubled Land skinner_jennifer162 years 3 months ago
StorySaviour's Face Mark Say42 years 3 months ago
StorySon of My Father Ewan62 years 3 months ago
StoryRoots JuliaB72 years 3 months ago
StorySpitting image Itane Vero22 years 3 months ago
StoryLand of Make Believe Jane Hyphen232 years 4 months ago
StoryLike What You See? D G Moody182 years 4 months ago
StoryBaron von Ernest and the stick Terrence Oblong72 years 4 months ago
StoryJohnny Ten Levs Turlough202 years 4 months ago
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My stories

Cherry

You Were Made for Me (2/2)

When the rich can have young people designed, grown and conditioned as their perfect companions
Cherry

You Were Made for Me (1/2)

When the rich can have young people designed, grown and conditioned as their perfect companions
Cherry

I Saw Her Again

A man sees his dead wife in the street
Cherry

The Noble Dosser

There was something between him and my mum ..... (Inspired by the Peter Howson painting)
Cherry

The Third Time (2/2)

Plague, pandemic ... and aliens

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141 of my comments have received 142 Great Feedback votes

1 Vote

A damn good story

Posted on Sun, 17 Apr 2022

I like the way you build up a sense of intrigue to reveal something quite remarkable about the character; and the reaction of his daughter is a lovely touch that takes it out on a high note.

Well done Jane.

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Posted in Jai

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Very good

Posted on Thu, 31 Mar 2022

Unpredictable and a nice twist at the end.

I don't think it needs the intro at all; could work nicely by going straight into the story.

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Posted in Poppy's Smile

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Very dark ...

Posted on Sun, 27 Mar 2022

... but a very human call for compassion. Good one Kilb.

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Posted in The Changeling

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Good story

Posted on Fri, 18 Mar 2022

Didn't see the twist coming.

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Posted in Wait!

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Forgive me for plagiarism ...

Posted on Sat, 05 Mar 2022

... but I ripped that off from Miles Davis. Opening bars of 'So What?'

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Posted in Ode to Jazz

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All I can say to that is ...

Posted on Sat, 05 Mar 2022

Ba-ba-da-ba-da-ba-da-wup

Waaaah wah!

 

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Posted in Ode to Jazz

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First World problem.

Posted on Fri, 04 Feb 2022

And one that drives many of us crazy. 

How many people have dived into a duvet cover and never been seen again?

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Posted in Duvet!

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Thump thump thump

Posted on Fri, 04 Feb 2022

Pounding rhythm and vivid imagery makes this an engrossing piece. Well done Turlough.

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Posted in Her Troubles

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Lovely story

Posted on Sun, 30 Jan 2022

I like the way you've woven the element of fantasy into a familiar life lesson about needing to move on at certain times, even when it causes an upset. And a nice upbeat ending. Greatly enjoyed donignacio.

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Posted in The Locksmith (Part 2)

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Good piece Turlogh

Posted on Sun, 30 Jan 2022

An interesting slice of observational reportage. I've been in a couple of beautiful places where I've also been aware of terrible things happening the past.

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Posted in Maglic Moments

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