I like the way you've woven the element of fantasy into a familiar life lesson about needing to move on at certain times, even when it causes an upset. And a nice upbeat ending. Greatly enjoyed donignacio.
An interesting slice of observational reportage. I've been in a couple of beautiful places where I've also been aware of terrible things happening the past.
All I can say to that is ...
Posted on Sat, 05 Mar 2022
Ba-ba-da-ba-da-ba-da-wup
Waaaah wah!
Posted in Ode to Jazz
First World problem.
Posted on Fri, 04 Feb 2022
And one that drives many of us crazy.
How many people have dived into a duvet cover and never been seen again?
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Thump thump thump
Posted on Fri, 04 Feb 2022
Pounding rhythm and vivid imagery makes this an engrossing piece. Well done Turlough.
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Lovely story
Posted on Sun, 30 Jan 2022
I like the way you've woven the element of fantasy into a familiar life lesson about needing to move on at certain times, even when it causes an upset. And a nice upbeat ending. Greatly enjoyed donignacio.
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Good piece Turlogh
Posted on Sun, 30 Jan 2022
An interesting slice of observational reportage. I've been in a couple of beautiful places where I've also been aware of terrible things happening the past.
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Enjoyed this. A touch of
Posted on Sat, 15 Jan 2022
Enjoyed this. A touch of Philip K Dick about it.
Read full commentPosted in Timesnot
Good story
Posted on Sun, 28 Nov 2021
I like the way you conveyed the sudden surge of anxiety brought on by the shock of not seeing your partner there.
Might have been a little stronger if you had given him a name; it depersonalises it a little to refer to him only as your...
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A lovely reminiscence
Posted on Sat, 23 Oct 2021
Especially for those of us of a 'certain age'.
Read full commentPosted in That Was Genesis
Ho ho ho!
Posted on Sun, 19 Sep 2021
A nice amusing tale with a neat little twist. Well done Luigi.
Read full commentPosted in Travels with my Aunt
Painful but touching
Posted on Fri, 27 Aug 2021
I like the way you convey all the pressures of dealing with a very panful situation through just a few highly believable details. Good one Ewan.
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