Mark Say
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| Type | Title | Author | Replies | Last updated |
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| Story | Frost in a Pocket | D G Moody | 9 | 3 years 10 months ago |
| Story | Duvet! | Rhiannonw | 15 | 3 years 10 months ago |
| Story | Forwards | rosaliekempthorne | 1 | 3 years 10 months ago |
| Story | Ghost Ship | smokejack | 2 | 3 years 10 months ago |
| Story | The Locksmith (Part 2) | donignacio | 10 | 3 years 10 months ago |
| Story | "japanese garden" -tanka | T. Imaan Tretch... | 6 | 3 years 10 months ago |
| Story | Sometimes forever | celticman | 17 | 3 years 10 months ago |
| Story | Matters of the Heart | luigi_pagano | 14 | 3 years 10 months ago |
| Story | Things I Did On My Day Off | HarryC | 16 | 3 years 10 months ago |
| Story | Timesnot | Ross_Lowe | 20 | 3 years 10 months ago |
| Story | Twosies or Threesies | celticman | 20 | 3 years 12 months ago |
| Story | Trail Of Misunderstanding | skinner_jennifer | 22 | 4 years 6 days ago |
| Story | That Was Genesis | skinner_jennifer | 15 | 4 years 2 weeks ago |
| Story | Muffin in the Mornin' with Vocals | hudsonmoon | 13 | 4 years 1 month ago |
| Story | Night Hag | rosaliekempthorne | 5 | 4 years 1 month ago |
| Story | Creeping F-ing Jesus. | celticman | 14 | 4 years 1 month ago |
| Story | Oh Mercy (1989) | mark p | 2 | 4 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Aunt Tilly | Terrence Oblong | 4 | 4 years 2 months ago |
| Story | The Fight | Jluskking | 1 | 4 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Travels with my Aunt | luigi_pagano | 10 | 4 years 2 months ago |
| Story | What did Jesus do? | celticman | 13 | 4 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Night Time Stalker | forest_for_ever | 3 | 4 years 3 months ago |
| Story | A Home Coming | Ewan | 2 | 4 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Just Another Minute | Peter Bennett | 8 | 4 years 4 months ago |
| Story | The Devil's Bones | luigi_pagano | 6 | 4 years 4 months ago |
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Indian Church
A hunted man finds an unexpected source of sanctuary deep in the forest
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Colour Between the Folds
All I wanted to do was stare at white, until I encountered the curtain, the projector and the mimes
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Meeting Tara
A middle aged man hears from a woman claiming to be his daughter.
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Sea Monster (part 2/2)
A young man, war at sea, and Turner's malevolent vision.
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Sea Monster (part 1/2)
A young man, war at sea, and Turner's malevolent vision.
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Uplifting
Posted on Sun, 28 Oct 2018
Considering it's an extract this works very well as a standalone piece. A credible slice of the type of angst that affects many people at some stage in their life, but with a nice uplifting conclusion. Good one Harry.
Read full commentPosted in Gift: A Son's Story (short extract 3)
Very sad....
Posted on Fri, 10 Aug 2018
... but quite uplifting in a way as well, and the narrator's big choice is quite credible.
One typo: you talk about a temp making positive notices when I think you mean noises.
Very good story drew.
Read full commentPosted in Words to the Wise
Very sad ...
Posted on Sun, 29 Jul 2018
... but powerful in its honesty. I'm sure a lot of people go through these emotions when a loved one who has been seriously ill for a long time passes away. And I like the way you convey that in a lot of little details about the narrator's life...
Read full commentPosted in Those Moments
Very sad
Posted on Sat, 16 Jun 2018
This might come across as a bit too quick and a bit too brutal, but I'm sure it represents the way some people treat their children. It pulls together a lot about parental favouritism, impatience and a heartless competition between siblings that...
Read full commentPosted in Choose One Cake Only
First rate story Kilb. I
Posted on Thu, 26 Apr 2018
First rate story Kilb. I liked the way you use a few details to convey Robert's memories of the marriage and the dynamics of the new relationships, and create an underlying tension with the lump in his stomach that couldn't realistically be...
Read full commentPosted in Something Hard Inside Him (Part 2)
It rings so true
Posted on Wed, 07 Feb 2018
As someone who was once an occasional, and unwilling goalkeeper on Sunday mornings, I can identify with this completely. The sense of desolation does take one to a spiritual place that would have been a great inspiration to Shakespeare.
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Read full commentPosted in The Hapless Goal Keeper at Yeadon
Very effective
Posted on Fri, 11 Aug 2017
It shows how efforts to deal with a social problem with a strong degree of humanity have been undermined in recent years. Excellent piece Elsie.
Read full commentPosted in 2002-05 My memories of working at a hostel for homeless men
Yes, it's like that ...
Posted on Sat, 30 Jul 2016
... and that's speaking as someone who's spent decades commuting in London.
Very impressive torscot.
Read full commentPosted in District Line ( London competition)
Simple but uplifting
Posted on Sun, 10 Jan 2016
A few well chosen phrases, an uncomplicated but effective construction, and a postive message. LIked this.
Read full commentPosted in In A Lifetime...
Interesting idea
Posted on Sat, 19 Dec 2015
I got into this from the first few lines, and found the shift to a human character interesting, but felt it was left open ended. Is it meant to be the beginning of a longer work
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