Mark Say
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| Story | Aunt Tilly | Terrence Oblong | 4 | 3 years 10 months ago |
| Story | The Fight | Jluskking | 1 | 3 years 10 months ago |
| Story | Travels with my Aunt | luigi_pagano | 10 | 3 years 11 months ago |
| Story | What did Jesus do? | celticman | 13 | 3 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Night Time Stalker | forest_for_ever | 3 | 3 years 11 months ago |
| Story | A Home Coming | Ewan | 2 | 3 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Just Another Minute | Peter Bennett | 8 | 4 years 1 week ago |
| Story | The Devil's Bones | luigi_pagano | 6 | 4 years 2 weeks ago |
| Story | The Cellist /Adolphina | Paul Barrell | 2 | 4 years 3 weeks ago |
| Story | School Day Memories | Kilb50 | 2 | 4 years 1 month ago |
| Story | make up | like_a_daisy_girl | 2 | 4 years 1 month ago |
| Story | The Reckoning | celticman | 10 | 4 years 1 month ago |
| Story | Penthouse | celticman | 7 | 4 years 1 month ago |
| Story | When the Time Comes | rosaliekempthorne | 5 | 4 years 1 month ago |
| Story | The Martians Have Landed | luigi_pagano | 10 | 4 years 1 month ago |
| Story | Impaired | Yutka | 18 | 4 years 1 month ago |
| Story | Branwell Clinic | seashore | 42 | 4 years 1 month ago |
| Story | Empire State (Part Two) | marandina | 11 | 4 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Earth | rosaliekempthorne | 2 | 4 years 2 months ago |
| Story | I Never Said Hullo | Mark Say | 7 | 4 years 2 months ago |
| Story | The Grizzling | Mark Burrow | 19 | 4 years 2 months ago |
| Story | "The Canines of My Life" | Penny4athought | 12 | 4 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Bobby-Joe-George | rosaliekempthorne | 6 | 4 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Truly Madly | luigi_pagano | 12 | 4 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Sooz 6 | celticman | 8 | 4 years 3 months ago |
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Indian Church
A hunted man finds an unexpected source of sanctuary deep in the forest
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Colour Between the Folds
All I wanted to do was stare at white, until I encountered the curtain, the projector and the mimes
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Meeting Tara
A middle aged man hears from a woman claiming to be his daughter.
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Sea Monster (part 2/2)
A young man, war at sea, and Turner's malevolent vision.
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Sea Monster (part 1/2)
A young man, war at sea, and Turner's malevolent vision.
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Uplifting
Posted on Sun, 28 Oct 2018
Considering it's an extract this works very well as a standalone piece. A credible slice of the type of angst that affects many people at some stage in their life, but with a nice uplifting conclusion. Good one Harry.
Read full commentPosted in Gift: A Son's Story (short extract 3)
Very sad....
Posted on Fri, 10 Aug 2018
... but quite uplifting in a way as well, and the narrator's big choice is quite credible.
One typo: you talk about a temp making positive notices when I think you mean noises.
Very good story drew.
Read full commentPosted in Words to the Wise
Very sad ...
Posted on Sun, 29 Jul 2018
... but powerful in its honesty. I'm sure a lot of people go through these emotions when a loved one who has been seriously ill for a long time passes away. And I like the way you convey that in a lot of little details about the narrator's life...
Read full commentPosted in Those Moments
Very sad
Posted on Sat, 16 Jun 2018
This might come across as a bit too quick and a bit too brutal, but I'm sure it represents the way some people treat their children. It pulls together a lot about parental favouritism, impatience and a heartless competition between siblings that...
Read full commentPosted in Choose One Cake Only
First rate story Kilb. I
Posted on Thu, 26 Apr 2018
First rate story Kilb. I liked the way you use a few details to convey Robert's memories of the marriage and the dynamics of the new relationships, and create an underlying tension with the lump in his stomach that couldn't realistically be...
Read full commentPosted in Something Hard Inside Him (Part 2)
It rings so true
Posted on Wed, 07 Feb 2018
As someone who was once an occasional, and unwilling goalkeeper on Sunday mornings, I can identify with this completely. The sense of desolation does take one to a spiritual place that would have been a great inspiration to Shakespeare.
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Read full commentPosted in The Hapless Goal Keeper at Yeadon
Very effective
Posted on Fri, 11 Aug 2017
It shows how efforts to deal with a social problem with a strong degree of humanity have been undermined in recent years. Excellent piece Elsie.
Read full commentPosted in 2002-05 My memories of working at a hostel for homeless men
Yes, it's like that ...
Posted on Sat, 30 Jul 2016
... and that's speaking as someone who's spent decades commuting in London.
Very impressive torscot.
Read full commentPosted in District Line ( London competition)
Simple but uplifting
Posted on Sun, 10 Jan 2016
A few well chosen phrases, an uncomplicated but effective construction, and a postive message. LIked this.
Read full commentPosted in In A Lifetime...
Interesting idea
Posted on Sat, 19 Dec 2015
I got into this from the first few lines, and found the shift to a human character interesting, but felt it was left open ended. Is it meant to be the beginning of a longer work
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