Mark Say
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| Type | Title | Author | Replies | Last updated |
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| Story | Ice Blue Eyes | rosaliekempthorne | 8 | 3 years 4 months ago |
| Story | moment of a miracle | Nolan | 7 | 3 years 4 months ago |
| Story | Schmooze control | celticman | 17 | 3 years 4 months ago |
| Story | A Man Named Malcolm | Mark Say | 13 | 3 years 4 months ago |
| Story | HOMESTEAD | MJ Fortino | 7 | 3 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Always On My Mind | Mark Say | 8 | 3 years 5 months ago |
| Story | The bridge of Sante Fe | lavadis | 11 | 3 years 6 months ago |
| Story | 1945 | luigi_pagano | 16 | 3 years 6 months ago |
| Story | The Flat on Ashburn Hill | maddan | 9 | 3 years 6 months ago |
| Story | Afterlife | bobblehat2023 | 2 | 3 years 6 months ago |
| Story | THE OLD TREE | rabipalat | 1 | 3 years 6 months ago |
| Story | The Tinder Date (Tinder is the night) | Truth42 | 12 | 3 years 7 months ago |
| Story | A Fond Farewell | luigi_pagano | 18 | 3 years 7 months ago |
| Story | The Glitch | maddan | 10 | 3 years 7 months ago |
| Story | Don't Disturb Mr. Evans | Elegantfowl | 4 | 3 years 7 months ago |
| Story | Hereafter | Ewan | 12 | 3 years 7 months ago |
| Story | The Killing Fields | sean mcnulty | 6 | 3 years 7 months ago |
| Story | May you live all the days of your life | monodemo | 8 | 3 years 7 months ago |
| Story | Shades of Grey | gletherby | 8 | 3 years 8 months ago |
| Story | Ghost Village | Mark Say | 3 | 3 years 8 months ago |
| Story | Fifteen. | Maxine Jasmin-Green | 7 | 3 years 8 months ago |
| Story | Ivy | Ciadish | 5 | 3 years 8 months ago |
| Story | On A Cold Night | luigi_pagano | 10 | 3 years 8 months ago |
| Story | On Ainley Top Looking Down | Ewan | 7 | 3 years 8 months ago |
| Story | Interstate 5 | Terrence Oblong | 3 | 3 years 9 months ago |








Mixed feelings ...
Posted on Sat, 11 Apr 2020
...about this. There's some interesting history, but it seems to be a conversation from another story and goes on for a very long time without moving that story on. Needs some reminder of the underlying narrative.
Read full commentPosted in Fatum Per Annorum Milia (3)
I like ...
Posted on Sun, 15 Mar 2020
... the way you pack a lot of detail of the men's history together into a very succinct piece, and convey the experience of people from a shared background having very different experiences of life. Good piece Kilb.
Read full commentPosted in Reunion
Good one Laurie
Posted on Sun, 29 Dec 2019
Really enjoyed fhis.
Read full commentPosted in The emergency bassoonist
I like ...
Posted on Sun, 24 Nov 2019
... the sense of asking something quite profound but in a brief, lighthearted way. NIce one Ewan.
Read full commentPosted in A Planet-ful of Diamonds
I lke graveyards
Posted on Sun, 03 Nov 2019
This reminds me of what makes them good places to visit .... at least for some of us.
Read full commentPosted in Graveyards
Good story
Posted on Sat, 11 May 2019
I like the fact that you left this with only a partial discovery, where Eve doesn't learn all the details about her mother's affair. I'd guess it's quite true to life.
Read full commentPosted in Letters from the Poet
Very good
Posted on Wed, 20 Feb 2019
Lots of little tensions and an expectation of future disappointment all conveyed in a few subtle details. Really enjoyed this.
Read full commentPosted in La Femme d'argent
Nice little piece
Posted on Sat, 23 Feb 2019
Conveys a combination of mystery and confusion with a concise choice of words.
Read full commentPosted in Just Our Little Secret
Nice poem
Posted on Sat, 16 Feb 2019
Simple images but nicely evocative of a relaxed walk.
Read full commentPosted in Walking Part of the Herefordshire Trail
Works well
Posted on Mon, 21 Jan 2019
I think it takes some time - maybe a little too long - for the tension to build, but once the creature emerges it's effective, and the twist at the end works nicely.
You need to be more consistent in your quotes: it changes between one and...
Read full commentPosted in When a Cold Wind Whistles
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