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StoryInvitation to a Cocktail Waitress Ewan22 years 1 week ago
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My stories

Cherry

Mr Bishop

An old teacher, the word of Jesus, and a longstanding grudge
Gold cherry

I Never Said Hullo

I noticed someone I hadn't seen for almost thirty years
Cherry
Story of the week

The Wet Afternoon of Ravilious

A picture on Twitter stirs up memories of a childhood loss
Cherry

You Were Made for Me (2/2)

When the rich can have young people designed, grown and conditioned as their perfect companions
Cherry

You Were Made for Me (1/2)

When the rich can have young people designed, grown and conditioned as their perfect companions

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139 of my comments have received 140 Great Feedback votes

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Intriguing images ....

Posted on Sun, 15 Jan 2023

... and a mysterious ring to it, but also a hint of something uplifting at the end. Good one Laurie.

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Posted in The bridge of Sante Fe

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Made me smile

Posted on Wed, 28 Dec 2022

Wetherspoons ... great place for a first date.

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Posted in The Tinder Date (Tinder is the night)

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Short, bitter sweet and very

Posted on Sun, 11 Dec 2022

Short, bitter sweet and very powerful. I think you convey all the emotions in this with great skill.

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Posted in May you live all the days of your life

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15?

Posted on Wed, 23 Nov 2022

I think there's valid scope for argument as to how that young woman truly feels about what she did a few years ago. I don't have a position on that; like most people I'm too far detachjed to really know her state of mind. But the fact remains...

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Posted in Fifteen.

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Good one Laurie

Posted on Fri, 04 Nov 2022

I love the sense of defiance against the inevitable in the final stanza.

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Posted in Old

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Good one Ewan

Posted on Sun, 06 Nov 2022

Assuming this is written from a perspective of around 20+ years ago, as references suggest World War One and it mentions the ex-soldier's centenary. Good in conveying a lot through a handful of vivid images.

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Posted in On Ainley Top Looking Down

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Short, simple, sweet.

Posted on Sun, 06 Nov 2022

Short, simple, sweet. And I like the sly joke line about flames and hot coals.

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Posted in On A Cold Night

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Good story

Posted on Sun, 03 Jul 2022

Generally I'm not into fantasy but this one held me throughout.

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Posted in Ebreon

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A damn good story

Posted on Sun, 17 Apr 2022

I like the way you build up a sense of intrigue to reveal something quite remarkable about the character; and the reaction of his daughter is a lovely touch that takes it out on a high note.

Well done Jane.

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Posted in Jai

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Very good

Posted on Thu, 31 Mar 2022

Unpredictable and a nice twist at the end.

I don't think it needs the intro at all; could work nicely by going straight into the story.

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Posted in Poppy's Smile

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