I like the way you build up a sense of intrigue to reveal something quite remarkable about the character; and the reaction of his daughter is a lovely touch that takes it out on a high note.
I like the way you've woven the element of fantasy into a familiar life lesson about needing to move on at certain times, even when it causes an upset. And a nice upbeat ending. Greatly enjoyed donignacio.
Good story
Posted on Sun, 03 Jul 2022
Generally I'm not into fantasy but this one held me throughout.
Read full commentPosted in Ebreon
A damn good story
Posted on Sun, 17 Apr 2022
I like the way you build up a sense of intrigue to reveal something quite remarkable about the character; and the reaction of his daughter is a lovely touch that takes it out on a high note.
Well done Jane.
Read full commentPosted in Jai
Very good
Posted on Thu, 31 Mar 2022
Unpredictable and a nice twist at the end.
I don't think it needs the intro at all; could work nicely by going straight into the story.
Read full commentPosted in Poppy's Smile
Very dark ...
Posted on Sun, 27 Mar 2022
... but a very human call for compassion. Good one Kilb.
Read full commentPosted in The Changeling
Good story
Posted on Fri, 18 Mar 2022
Didn't see the twist coming.
Read full commentPosted in Wait!
Forgive me for plagiarism ...
Posted on Sat, 05 Mar 2022
... but I ripped that off from Miles Davis. Opening bars of 'So What?'
Read full commentPosted in Ode to Jazz
All I can say to that is ...
Posted on Sat, 05 Mar 2022
Ba-ba-da-ba-da-ba-da-wup
Waaaah wah!
Posted in Ode to Jazz
First World problem.
Posted on Fri, 04 Feb 2022
And one that drives many of us crazy.
How many people have dived into a duvet cover and never been seen again?
Read full commentPosted in Duvet!
Thump thump thump
Posted on Fri, 04 Feb 2022
Pounding rhythm and vivid imagery makes this an engrossing piece. Well done Turlough.
Read full commentPosted in Her Troubles
Lovely story
Posted on Sun, 30 Jan 2022
I like the way you've woven the element of fantasy into a familiar life lesson about needing to move on at certain times, even when it causes an upset. And a nice upbeat ending. Greatly enjoyed donignacio.
Read full commentPosted in The Locksmith (Part 2)
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