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My stories

Story of the week

Goya's Dog

By Mark Say on Wed, 26 Sep 2012

What's the most disturbing? A series of human horrors or a doomed dog?
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A Fat Nude

By Mark Say on Sun, 26 Aug 2012

A man sees a painting ... and has a serious shock
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Redefining the Face

By Mark Say on Sun, 19 Aug 2012

An artist pushes his model too far
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A Bar at the Folies Fulham

By Mark Say on Tue, 07 Aug 2012

A work of art, a barmaid, a misfortune
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Duck in a Bottle

By Mark Say on Mon, 09 Jan 2012

Two men in a prison cell take a twisted journey through Buddhism
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136 of my comments have received 138 Great Feedback votes

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Well done John. I found this

Posted on Sat, 22 Feb 2014

Well done John. I found this a very vivid in evoking the mood as much as describing the place, and really impressed by that hint of something sour dropped in at the end. If anything, I thought you could have made a touch more of that, but still...

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Posted in That Field

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Interesting story with a neat

Posted on Wed, 29 Jan 2014

Interesting story with a neat twist. My one criticism is that the short, sharp sentences make the prose a little flat. It's more common for people to overwrite, but I think that if you bring a few of the sentences together it would help things...

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Posted in A Breath so sweet ...

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Nice story. I like the way it

Posted on Sat, 04 Jan 2014

Nice story. I like the way it builds the sense of anticipation which is then quickly deflated. I bet most of us have gone through something similar at some time.

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Posted in Dormity Gardens

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Aaaah! Apostrophes with a

Posted on Sat, 30 Nov 2013

Aaaah! Apostrophes with a plural S! You also want to watch out for the its' when it should be it's.

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