Important that you press ahead with what feels right for you Peter. I can see from others' comments that others are enjoying the stories as you've written.
... that statues are nearly always erected as an expression of admiration for a person. I can fully understand the growing objections when that person was actively involved in something that is impossible to defend. Even if it's a reminder of a...
...about this. There's some interesting history, but it seems to be a conversation from another story and goes on for a very long time without moving that story on. Needs some reminder of the underlying narrative.
Good one Ewan
Posted on Mon, 01 Mar 2021
I like the way it conveys a sense of struggle with a handful of sharp images.
Read full commentPosted in Nocturne
Very effective ....
Posted on Sat, 13 Feb 2021
... in creating a sense of alienation from the world.
Read full commentPosted in Mariner
That's good
Posted on Sat, 06 Feb 2021
Important that you press ahead with what feels right for you Peter. I can see from others' comments that others are enjoying the stories as you've written.
Read full commentPosted in Just Another Minute
An enlightening piece
Posted on Sun, 07 Feb 2021
Imporant history this.
Read full commentPosted in The Campaign for Terrence Oblong - Monty Python and the Porter Ale
A nice bite of mystery and
Posted on Sun, 17 Jan 2021
A nice bite of mystery and dark humour.
Read full commentPosted in Chekhov's Gun
Great metaphor
Posted on Sun, 13 Dec 2020
And very perceptive in conveying the way we gradually let many things go from our minds.
Read full commentPosted in Certain Memories
I'd just point out ...
Posted on Fri, 07 Aug 2020
... that statues are nearly always erected as an expression of admiration for a person. I can fully understand the growing objections when that person was actively involved in something that is impossible to defend. Even if it's a reminder of a...
Read full commentPosted in American Demons
Oh yes!
Posted on Sat, 01 Aug 2020
I like the way this creates a sustained fizz through the choice of words and imagery of the natural world at work. Good poem.
Read full commentPosted in Electric Bees
Ho ho ho!
Posted on Sat, 11 Jul 2020
A nice little satirical take on our current dilemma.
Read full commentPosted in Take Off That Gloomy Mask of Tragedy!
Mixed feelings ...
Posted on Sat, 11 Apr 2020
...about this. There's some interesting history, but it seems to be a conversation from another story and goes on for a very long time without moving that story on. Needs some reminder of the underlying narrative.
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