Mark Say
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| Type | Title | Author | Replies | Last updated |
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| Story | Mr Bishop | Mark Say | 1 | 4 years 5 months ago |
| Story | The Christmas Coaster | hudsonmoon | 30 | 4 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Frost in a Pocket | D G Moody | 9 | 4 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Duvet! | Rhiannonw | 15 | 4 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Forwards | rosaliekempthorne | 1 | 4 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Ghost Ship | smokejack | 2 | 4 years 5 months ago |
| Story | The Locksmith (Part 2) | donignacio | 10 | 4 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Sometimes forever | celticman | 17 | 4 years 6 months ago |
| Story | Things I Did On My Day Off | HarryC | 16 | 4 years 6 months ago |
| Story | Timesnot | Ross_Lowe | 20 | 4 years 6 months ago |
| Story | Twosies or Threesies | celticman | 20 | 4 years 7 months ago |
| Story | Trail Of Misunderstanding | skinner_jennifer | 22 | 4 years 7 months ago |
| Story | That Was Genesis | skinner_jennifer | 15 | 4 years 8 months ago |
| Story | Muffin in the Mornin' with Vocals | hudsonmoon | 13 | 4 years 8 months ago |
| Story | Night Hag | rosaliekempthorne | 5 | 4 years 8 months ago |
| Story | Creeping F-ing Jesus. | celticman | 14 | 4 years 9 months ago |
| Story | Oh Mercy (1989) | mark p | 2 | 4 years 10 months ago |
| Story | Aunt Tilly | Terrence Oblong | 4 | 4 years 10 months ago |
| Story | The Fight | Jluskking | 1 | 4 years 10 months ago |
| Story | What did Jesus do? | celticman | 13 | 4 years 10 months ago |
| Story | Night Time Stalker | forest_for_ever | 3 | 4 years 10 months ago |
| Story | A Home Coming | Ewan | 2 | 4 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Just Another Minute | Peter Bennett | 8 | 4 years 11 months ago |
| Story | The Cellist /Adolphina | Paul Barrell | 2 | 5 years 20 hours ago |
| Story | School Day Memories | Kilb50 | 2 | 5 years 1 week ago |
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Indian Church
A hunted man finds an unexpected source of sanctuary deep in the forest
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Colour Between the Folds
All I wanted to do was stare at white, until I encountered the curtain, the projector and the mimes
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Meeting Tara
A middle aged man hears from a woman claiming to be his daughter.
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Sea Monster (part 2/2)
A young man, war at sea, and Turner's malevolent vision.
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Sea Monster (part 1/2)
A young man, war at sea, and Turner's malevolent vision.
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Simple but uplifting
Posted on Sun, 10 Jan 2016
A few well chosen phrases, an uncomplicated but effective construction, and a postive message. LIked this.
Read full commentPosted in In A Lifetime...
Interesting idea
Posted on Sat, 19 Dec 2015
I got into this from the first few lines, and found the shift to a human character interesting, but felt it was left open ended. Is it meant to be the beginning of a longer work
Read full commentPosted in Raal
So good
Posted on Sat, 14 Nov 2015
As always, it's poignant without being sentimental, and I love the way you mix the realist images of the hospital with the spiritual visions of a departing soul. Lovely Bee.
Read full commentPosted in 57
Painful but sweet
Posted on Sat, 22 Aug 2015
Great story Silver. You've created an awful situation, tapped into some deeply uncomfortable emotions, but produced something that's ultimately life affirming. Terrific.
Read full commentPosted in The X Factor
Excellent
Posted on Sat, 22 Aug 2015
Agree with A on this: pace and structure are perfect and it does a great job at conveying the anxiety attached to cold judgements passed by others. We all know this is a world full of grey areas and nuance, but often we're judged on black and...
Read full commentPosted in Result (Inspiration Point)
Sad and charming
Posted on Sat, 30 May 2015
Lovely poem Silver. I like the way you convey the sense that we might try to concentrate our memories in objects that can then be discarded, but that we can never really do so. Short, bitter sweet and quite moving.
One little point: I...
Read full commentPosted in Moving On
Ouch!
Posted on Sat, 28 Feb 2015
Prickly and painful in its emotions, but I like this for the way it conveys the harm we can do to each other through not talking.
Good one Basket Case.
Read full commentPosted in I couldn't ask, you wouldn't say.
Oooowww!
Posted on Sun, 01 Feb 2015
Painful, but so real. Captures the way that peer pressure contributes to emotional cruelty among children, and I like the way that you convey Clare's sense of shame without actually stating it. Well done Hayley.
Read full commentPosted in Growing Up
I like this ...
Posted on Sat, 10 Jan 2015
... despite the concluding tragedy. There's a constant emphasis on the mundane but with a suggestion that it can bring just as much joy to a person's life as enduring discomforts in pursuit of over-indulgence. It might be a conservative message,...
Read full commentPosted in Lucky For Me
Effectively vivid
Posted on Thu, 02 Oct 2014
I think this portrays a dramatic little scene in very vivid terms, and made me want to know more about the characters. It was a little frustrating in coming across as just a fragment of something larger, but id does convey the tension within the...
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