Mark Say
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| Type | Title | Author | Replies | Last updated |
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| Story | Ingerland My Ingerland | Kilb50 | 8 | 4 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Only Imagined | rosaliekempthorne | 3 | 4 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Dayroom Conversation | Mark Burrow | 26 | 4 years 4 months ago |
| Story | A Paragon | luigi_pagano | 2 | 4 years 4 months ago |
| Story | Weightless | Mark Burrow | 24 | 4 years 5 months ago |
| Story | For King and Country | mitzi44 | 4 | 4 years 5 months ago |
| Story | The King and I | luigi_pagano | 18 | 4 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Nocturne | Ewan | 4 | 4 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Take it Back | Ross_Lowe | 30 | 4 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Uncle John and Jimmy. | celticman | 7 | 4 years 6 months ago |
| Story | Mariner | onemorething | 4 | 4 years 6 months ago |
| Story | The Campaign for Terrence Oblong - Monty Python and the Porter Ale | Terrence Oblong | 5 | 4 years 6 months ago |
| Story | Mile High Layover | Mapestmo | 4 | 4 years 6 months ago |
| Story | Beware of Greeks Telling Tales | luigi_pagano | 4 | 4 years 6 months ago |
| Story | The Wet Afternoon of Ravilious | Mark Say | 6 | 4 years 7 months ago |
| Story | The Stresemann's Bristlefront | luigi_pagano | 10 | 4 years 7 months ago |
| Story | Dear Cleo | luigi_pagano | 6 | 4 years 7 months ago |
| Story | Chekhov's Gun | Kilb50 | 2 | 4 years 7 months ago |
| Story | Being There | ralph | 2 | 4 years 7 months ago |
| Story | The Kitchen Incident - A Short Ramble | hudsonmoon | 18 | 4 years 7 months ago |
| Story | A Pile Up of Boys | celticman | 18 | 4 years 7 months ago |
| Story | Dav Prentice. | celticman | 7 | 4 years 8 months ago |
| Story | Certain Memories | onemorething | 14 | 4 years 8 months ago |
| Story | The Ticket Window | hudsonmoon | 13 | 4 years 9 months ago |
| Story | You Were Made for Me (1/2) | Mark Say | 3 | 4 years 9 months ago |
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Beneath the Water Lilies
As Claude Monet paints yet another view of water lilies, his mind takes a dark turn about what lies below the surface of the pond
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Nighthawks
Ever wondered what's going on in that Edward Hopper painting?
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St John the Baptist
Caravaggio kept painting the saint as a naked boy. Then someone came to kill him.
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Vincent's Crows
Van Gogh's Crows in a Wheatfield wreaks havoc in a man's mind
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Red on Maroon
Abstract art in a struggle against grief
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Interesting idea
Posted on Sat, 19 Dec 2015
I got into this from the first few lines, and found the shift to a human character interesting, but felt it was left open ended. Is it meant to be the beginning of a longer work
Read full commentPosted in Raal
So good
Posted on Sat, 14 Nov 2015
As always, it's poignant without being sentimental, and I love the way you mix the realist images of the hospital with the spiritual visions of a departing soul. Lovely Bee.
Read full commentPosted in 57
Painful but sweet
Posted on Sat, 22 Aug 2015
Great story Silver. You've created an awful situation, tapped into some deeply uncomfortable emotions, but produced something that's ultimately life affirming. Terrific.
Read full commentPosted in The X Factor
Excellent
Posted on Sat, 22 Aug 2015
Agree with A on this: pace and structure are perfect and it does a great job at conveying the anxiety attached to cold judgements passed by others. We all know this is a world full of grey areas and nuance, but often we're judged on black and...
Read full commentPosted in Result (Inspiration Point)
Sad and charming
Posted on Sat, 30 May 2015
Lovely poem Silver. I like the way you convey the sense that we might try to concentrate our memories in objects that can then be discarded, but that we can never really do so. Short, bitter sweet and quite moving.
One little point: I...
Read full commentPosted in Moving On
Ouch!
Posted on Sat, 28 Feb 2015
Prickly and painful in its emotions, but I like this for the way it conveys the harm we can do to each other through not talking.
Good one Basket Case.
Read full commentPosted in I couldn't ask, you wouldn't say.
Oooowww!
Posted on Sun, 01 Feb 2015
Painful, but so real. Captures the way that peer pressure contributes to emotional cruelty among children, and I like the way that you convey Clare's sense of shame without actually stating it. Well done Hayley.
Read full commentPosted in Growing Up
I like this ...
Posted on Sat, 10 Jan 2015
... despite the concluding tragedy. There's a constant emphasis on the mundane but with a suggestion that it can bring just as much joy to a person's life as enduring discomforts in pursuit of over-indulgence. It might be a conservative message,...
Read full commentPosted in Lucky For Me
Effectively vivid
Posted on Thu, 02 Oct 2014
I think this portrays a dramatic little scene in very vivid terms, and made me want to know more about the characters. It was a little frustrating in coming across as just a fragment of something larger, but id does convey the tension within the...
Read full commentPosted in The Distance Between Them
Excellent
Posted on Thu, 04 Sep 2014
Conveys so many old yearnings and frustrations in one brief incident. Well done Torscot.
Read full commentPosted in My little Indian in Summer (I.P.)
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