Mark Say

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StoryThe Queue: Part 2 KiriKit51 year 6 months ago
StoryEddie's Day rosaliekempthorne11 year 6 months ago
StoryIt Begins rosaliekempthorne31 year 7 months ago
StoryThe Womb and the Wave ice rivers71 year 7 months ago
StoryUlf and Sven and Eurovision Song Contest Terrence Oblong21 year 7 months ago
Story"The Coffee House Spy" Penny4athought101 year 8 months ago
StoryPad Life 6: The Elephant In The Room airyfairy291 year 8 months ago
StoryEbreon rosaliekempthorne61 year 8 months ago
StoryTo We the Estranged Fathers. ice rivers41 year 9 months ago
StoryArchie's Place rosaliekempthorne41 year 9 months ago
StoryThe coach stop Simon Barget111 year 10 months ago
StoryThe Man on the Other End of the Phone Ewan131 year 10 months ago
StoryNor There Mark Burrow231 year 11 months ago
StoryJai Jane Hyphen101 year 11 months ago
StoryListening rosaliekempthorne81 year 11 months ago
StoryPoppy's Smile maddan31 year 11 months ago
StoryShared Existence Penny4athought81 year 11 months ago
StoryMust Make a Note luigi_pagano142 years 1 day ago
StoryThe Changeling Kilb5042 years 2 days ago
StoryWait! monodemo42 years 1 week ago
StoryI Used To Have a Garden monodemo32 years 1 week ago
StoryHer Troubles Turlough202 years 2 weeks ago
StoryOde to Jazz Kilb5032 years 3 weeks ago
StoryUnnecessorry KennethVKB22 years 4 weeks ago
StoryDebris agnosticnun212 years 1 month ago

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My stories

Cherry

The Third Time (2/2)

Plague, pandemic ... and aliens

The Third Time (1/2)

Plague, pandemic ... and aliens
Gold cherry

White Doors

A mind trapped inside a painting
Cherry

Harold’s Big Sleep

A dog's final visit to the vet drags up a dark secret

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110 of my comments have received 111 Great Feedback votes

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Good story

Posted on Sun, 28 Nov 2021

I like the way you conveyed the sudden surge of anxiety brought on by the shock of not seeing your partner there.

Might have been a little stronger if you had given him a name; it depersonalises it a little to refer to him only as your...

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Posted in Trail Of Misunderstanding

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A lovely reminiscence

Posted on Sat, 23 Oct 2021

Especially for those of us of a 'certain age'.

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Posted in That Was Genesis

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Ho ho ho!

Posted on Sun, 19 Sep 2021

A nice amusing tale with a neat little twist. Well done Luigi.

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Posted in Travels with my Aunt

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Painful but touching

Posted on Fri, 27 Aug 2021

I like the way you convey all the pressures of dealing with a very panful situation through just a few highly believable details. Good one Ewan.

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Posted in A Home Coming

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Nice piece

Posted on Mon, 30 Aug 2021

Convincing imagery of an oppressively hot day. Just reading it made me want to have a lie down. 

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Posted in A Hot Afternoon in Malki Chiflik

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Nice story

Posted on Sun, 18 Jul 2021

A welcome antidote to the horrific memories of school dinners.

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Posted in School Day Memories

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Good story

Posted on Sat, 08 May 2021

Bleak but engaging. Although I suppose I would enjoy being a Londoner rather than Ingerlish.

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Posted in Ingerland My Ingerland

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Quite painful ...

Posted on Sat, 01 May 2021

... but also very touching. I like the way you convey the sense of a body and mind not quite in control but also relishing life.

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Posted in Impaired

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Lovely piece Penny

Posted on Sun, 21 Mar 2021

My wife and I have had similar experiences with cats; you know when you're ready to take one in, and you soon know whether they're right for living with you. When my wife's old cat died we had two new ones within two months and they were with us...

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Posted in "The Canines of My Life"

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Good one Ewan

Posted on Mon, 01 Mar 2021

I like the way it conveys a sense of struggle with a handful of sharp images.

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Posted in Nocturne

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