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I read The Herald ’s weather forecast as others would scry a chicken’s entrails after eating barbecue wings. Tomorrow will be dry, but your life will...
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grief
Grief is a sort of guilt This should be quick Just a click of fingers And away any day Callous and dumb –business To fall apart Right at the start A...
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Grimms 105
The forensic expert, Mr Cleary, wears a baggy brown cardigan with bulky pockets he jams his fists into. He shadows the Macer, but is smaller, hitting...
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Grimms 104
Detective Inspector Grier knows his place and sits smoking, which gives him something to do, in the soundproofed room away from the stage of the...
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Grimms 103
Representing the Crown and prosecuting for the Fiscal Office, Queen’s Counsel Montrose appears born to the era of wigs and absentmindedly fingers the...
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in a twnklikng of a child's
Posted on Sun, 22 May 2022
in a twnklikng of a child's eye all the wonder opens. great stuff.
Read full commentPosted in In a Land of Magicians
this is great. Loneliness
Posted on Fri, 20 May 2022
this is great. Loneliness unravels us and poverty leaves us to our own devices. Both are entwined here. A work you should be proud of.
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yes, indeed can be poisonous,
Posted on Fri, 20 May 2022
yes, indeed can be poisonous, Beauty often is.
Read full commentPosted in Eves' Tears
you're certainlty not
Posted on Wed, 18 May 2022
you're certainlty not grossing us out. You're living it and we follow what you're going through. Nothiing gross. Nobel.
Read full commentPosted in Janus 12
I think she wants to give
Posted on Wed, 18 May 2022
I think she wants to give birth to the baby Jesus. I really like this, but too much exposition. .Need to lighten it a bit with dialogue. Perhaps some kind of arguement about which baby Jesus they want? the black or white one?
Read full commentPosted in Legend of the Pah - 8 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)
Living in the moment Jenny.
Posted on Mon, 16 May 2022
Living in the moment Jenny. An open book. An open window.
Read full commentPosted in Open Windows Of My Soul
yeh, made tastier by being
Posted on Fri, 13 May 2022
yeh, made tastier by being forbidden, I guess.
Read full commentPosted in The Forbidden Kiss
the worse case scenario, as
Posted on Thu, 12 May 2022
the worse case scenario, as you know, is undigested food. Well, there's a lot of worst-case scenarios and you've covered most of them. Nothing gross about it. Keep writing from the front line.
Read full commentPosted in Hospital 3 and Janus 11
lovely, but living in
Posted on Mon, 09 May 2022
lovely, but living in Scotland we dont' learn about sunshine until we're adults.
Read full commentPosted in You learn about the sunshine
I'm glad you've remained
Posted on Wed, 11 May 2022
I'm glad you've remained obfective enoght to write it all down.
Read full commentPosted in Hospital 2, Janus 10
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