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Stephen, I don't manage to
Posted on Thu, 11 Dec 2014
Stephen, I don't manage to dip much into the prose section, and horror and surreal isn't really my scene – I didn't even like 'Alice in Wonderland' as a child! However I did find reading this intriguing for the well-structured brevity, and the...
Thanks, I appreciate your interest at analysis, Stephen. My background is Welsh and Welsh poetry which makes a lot of use of repetition of consonants or part words to form unbotrusive patterns to help the impact of verse. (In its technical...
The deceit of glitter. Reminded me of Proverbs chapter 7.
The commited and thoughtful love needful to seal the physical, Young people are bombarded more than ever with false suggestions, but hopefully there is a turning away, seeing the...
It sounds as if you were protected from many evils around. At that age it is easy not to realise the dangers and the unkind and dangerous people that there sadly are around. Rhiannon
The last two lines are the illusion promulgated for 'freedom' from responsibility, but leading to disillusionment and depression. There is purpose, there is usefulness, there is satisfaction, though always frustration and weariness in the...
Stephen, I don't manage to
Posted on Thu, 11 Dec 2014
Stephen, I don't manage to dip much into the prose section, and horror and surreal isn't really my scene – I didn't even like 'Alice in Wonderland' as a child! However I did find reading this intriguing for the well-structured brevity, and the...
Read full commentPosted in Shadow Cooking
Thanks, I appreciate your
Posted on Mon, 15 Sep 2014
Thanks, I appreciate your interest at analysis, Stephen. My background is Welsh and Welsh poetry which makes a lot of use of repetition of consonants or part words to form unbotrusive patterns to help the impact of verse. (In its technical...
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The deceit of glitter.
Posted on Thu, 13 Nov 2025
The deceit of glitter. Reminded me of Proverbs chapter 7.
The commited and thoughtful love needful to seal the physical, Young people are bombarded more than ever with false suggestions, but hopefully there is a turning away, seeing the...
Read full commentPosted in Changing Times
Reasoning, listenning,
Posted on Tue, 11 Nov 2025
Reasoning, listenning, discussing banished, just shoot from the hip and shout is so prevalent, it seems. Rh
Read full commentPosted in Land of Hope and Fury
Nice to see something from
Posted on Wed, 05 Nov 2025
Nice to see something from you again! What a surprse ending! I didn't see that coming. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Red Letter
I liked the description of
Posted on Mon, 03 Nov 2025
I liked the description of cycling in the forest. Rhiannon
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As I started reading, I
Posted on Tue, 21 Oct 2025
As I started reading, I thought it was famliar!
Though surreal, you gently highlight empathetically and poignantly bereavements' emotions. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Why does it always rain in graveyards?
It sounds as if you were
Posted on Thu, 02 Oct 2025
It sounds as if you were protected from many evils around. At that age it is easy not to realise the dangers and the unkind and dangerous people that there sadly are around. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in All's Well That Ends Well
I found it and removed the
Posted on Tue, 30 Sep 2025
I found it and removed the photo of parts of Pooh and Paddington book covers. Rh
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The last two lines are the
Posted on Fri, 26 Sep 2025
The last two lines are the illusion promulgated for 'freedom' from responsibility, but leading to disillusionment and depression. There is purpose, there is usefulness, there is satisfaction, though always frustration and weariness in the...
Read full commentPosted in RIP Real World
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