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In the middle of a hot night …
Pitter-patter … Earth thirsts, seeking soaking … garden gasps for more, more …
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“Hide and Seek”
Looking after grandkids while the parents shop … It’s like when you play games with a little child …
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Robin's Pincushion again
Slowly walking to the post, industrial area weeds along the fence –what's that? – nearly missed it! …such a pretty surprise …
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Hiding from, or Hiding in …
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] … Some thought the writer sheltered there in rocky cleft in rainstorm …
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Body-Building Begins!
Chew! chew! chew! so that wonderful spit assembled in mouth glands with enzymes that split some starch to begin …
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I like this very much, too. I
Posted on Wed, 20 Jun 2018
I like this very much, too. I remember the word 'phototropism' from biology experiments on plants growing towards the light, but hadn't though of 'heliotropism' indicating turning towards the sun. And so I hadn't realised that is where the name...
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Very credible situation with
Posted on Wed, 14 Mar 2018
Very credible situation with his Dad. Interesting how it comes out here the real concern his mother does have for him, and his awareness of that, though their communication together is difficult. In some ways his special phobias/worries seem to...
Read full commentPosted in Jack Mutant - Which Way is Down? (part fourteen)
Thought-provoking, Jean, and
Posted on Fri, 12 Feb 2016
Thought-provoking, Jean, and I can empathize with much that is on your mind. As a family, when I was growing up we didn't kiss, hug, or say 'I love you' much, but I think we were at ease with each other and had a warmth of expression in greeting...
Read full commentPosted in I Hate the Word Love
You do seem to be able to
Posted on Mon, 05 Oct 2015
You do seem to be able to describe his thinking very naturally, and his observations, looking into the water, noticing the small life, and drifting into imaginations.
Read full commentThen suddenly the tensions, mirrored a bit by his grandad's tensions. It...
Posted in Jake Mutant - Chapter Four
Welcome, you are new here,
Posted on Thu, 27 Aug 2015
Welcome, you are new here, aren't you? You've drawn out an interesting and tender theme here.
I liked the thoughtfulness of 'As the passion that they share Crescendos with great care.'
Personally I would have liked a...
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This reminded me of when my
Posted on Wed, 07 Jan 2015
This reminded me of when my son was being taught about the 'rules of composition' for music, and I worried he would lose what seemed to be spontaneous and individual intuition for what would make interesting sound. He assured me it wouldn't, but...
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Stephen, I don't manage to
Posted on Thu, 11 Dec 2014
Stephen, I don't manage to dip much into the prose section, and horror and surreal isn't really my scene – I didn't even like 'Alice in Wonderland' as a child! However I did find reading this intriguing for the well-structured brevity, and the...
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Thanks, I appreciate your
Posted on Mon, 15 Sep 2014
Thanks, I appreciate your interest at analysis, Stephen. My background is Welsh and Welsh poetry which makes a lot of use of repetition of consonants or part words to form unbotrusive patterns to help the impact of verse. (In its technical...
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Glad the nurses are proving
Posted on Mon, 24 Aug 2026
Glad the nurses are proving friends. It is tough journey for you, one step at a time, and be glad if you can sleep. Often wondering how you're getting on, and praying. God knows what comfort you need.
much love, Rhiannon
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Wow!! I assume that is
Posted on Thu, 20 Aug 2026
Wow!! I assume that is autobiography, a well-remembered 'moment'. So well described! Rhiannon
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