Sisyphus knew daily endurance how absurd, the behaviour of living. Plastic handles cut off the blood 6 bags of tins, why tins? lugged along the long...
I love those fleeting glimpses of other lives from a train window, speed and stillness meet. The Degas pose is a lovely image, as is the winter jasmine wind wrap, an elderly ballerina in contrast to hard metallic lines, has a touch of Chagall...
I like the perspective here, projecting into the future and considering the present, lots of layers, personal and distant at the same time. Good luck with the pamphlet!
I just love your enthusiastic responses Art, they lift my spirits. I have an affinity with your side of the world, I was brought up in NZ, very many years ago. I didn't find out about one of my great greats... who apparently brought the zither...
Hurrah! You're posting again
Posted on Thu, 02 Jul 2015
Hurrah! You're posting again, another (glassy) gem.
Read full commentPosted in A Game of Stones
I love those fleeting
Posted on Thu, 02 Jul 2015
I love those fleeting glimpses of other lives from a train window, speed and stillness meet. The Degas pose is a lovely image, as is the winter jasmine wind wrap, an elderly ballerina in contrast to hard metallic lines, has a touch of Chagall...
Read full commentPosted in From a Stopping Train (Poetry Monthly)
A beautiful cartoon, strange
Posted on Wed, 24 Jun 2015
A beautiful cartoon, strange and dreamy.
Read full commentPosted in Chapter Ten Conquest of Chimera
Great imagination. Lovely
Posted on Wed, 24 Jun 2015
Great imagination. Lovely dreamy feel.
Read full commentPosted in 'Til Death, Part 2: Heaven
Lovely ideas.
Posted on Mon, 22 Jun 2015
Lovely ideas.
Read full commentPosted in Chapter Nine Conquest of Chimera
I'm enjoying this unusual
Posted on Wed, 10 Jun 2015
I'm enjoying this unusual story.
Read full commentPosted in Chapter Five Conquest of Chimera
you have a great name! Poor
Posted on Wed, 10 Jun 2015
you have a great name! Poor Otis - cranberry martinis, I like the quirkiness of that. Interesting, I want to know what he's been up to.
Read full commentPosted in A City of Bad Souls
Great plot development and
Posted on Sun, 07 Jun 2015
Great plot development and description, very smoothly written.
Read full commentPosted in The Fifth Star - Chapter 16 (1/2) - The Hideout
I like the perspective here,
Posted on Sun, 07 Jun 2015
I like the perspective here, projecting into the future and considering the present, lots of layers, personal and distant at the same time. Good luck with the pamphlet!
Read full commentPosted in Two Years
I just love your enthusiastic
Posted on Sat, 06 Jun 2015
I just love your enthusiastic responses Art, they lift my spirits. I have an affinity with your side of the world, I was brought up in NZ, very many years ago. I didn't find out about one of my great greats... who apparently brought the zither...
Read full commentPosted in Breath
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