Aboloutely lovely. The pace of it is so still, like panning round a wide shot slowly. I especially liked the treble clef hose. All of it is really imaginative.
I like this more than the one of yours right next to it that got the cherry. I always feel I must try the uncherried ones because they may feel left out! I like the feeling of being in a pause but also knowing that things move on.
I can't tell you how touched I am that you remembered this and have highlighted it through my poem. Thank you so much. I don't think I should take credit for any campaigning though. It's a very easy and small thing to put the story and the poem ...
Great poem. I loved the coldest star line. It gives the great feeling of distance and unreachabiltiy]....oh I can't spell it and I'm not even sure if it's a word anyway! Unreachable will do. Propaganda in every country, I would say.
You caught a moment
Posted on Wed, 14 Jul 2021
You caught a moment beautifully. I love the sound of the wood pigeon.
Read full commentPosted in A sleepy mid-July mid-afternoon
There's a line from you/your
Posted on Wed, 07 Jul 2021
There's a line from you/your pen to the sparrow hawk, like a kite on the end of a piece of string. Keeps you looking up. Lovely poem.
Read full commentPosted in Daydreamer
Aboloutely lovely. The pace
Posted on Tue, 28 Apr 2020
Aboloutely lovely. The pace of it is so still, like panning round a wide shot slowly. I especially liked the treble clef hose. All of it is really imaginative.
Read full commentPosted in 28th April
Beautiful, both in words and
Posted on Wed, 22 Apr 2020
Beautiful, both in words and pace. Again, your last lines are worth waiting for.
Read full commentPosted in I Want To Tell You Things
No, don't change it! I like
Posted on Thu, 09 Apr 2020
No, don't change it! I like the way the punch line hits you.
Read full commentPosted in Learning How To Be Human
Clever because I got duped by
Posted on Mon, 12 Aug 2019
Clever because I got duped by all the small, domestic stuff - like potatoes! - and then it was very moving by the end.
Read full commentPosted in Katy, A Ghost Story (IP)
I like this more than the one
Posted on Fri, 19 Jul 2019
I like this more than the one of yours right next to it that got the cherry. I always feel I must try the uncherried ones because they may feel left out! I like the feeling of being in a pause but also knowing that things move on.
Read full commentPosted in Half past nine
I can't tell you how touched
Posted on Thu, 23 Jul 2015
I can't tell you how touched I am that you remembered this and have highlighted it through my poem. Thank you so much. I don't think I should take credit for any campaigning though. It's a very easy and small thing to put the story and the poem ...
Read full commentPosted in Not Years
Great poem. I loved the
Posted on Wed, 21 Feb 2018
Great poem. I loved the coldest star line. It gives the great feeling of distance and unreachabiltiy]....oh I can't spell it and I'm not even sure if it's a word anyway! Unreachable will do. Propaganda in every country, I would say.
Read full commentPosted in coldest planet
I loved this. Looks simple
Posted on Wed, 14 Feb 2018
I loved this. Looks simple but feels intricate. I really liked 'find daylight now in mine.'
Read full commentPosted in Now
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