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Great poem. I loved the
Posted on Wed, 21 Feb 2018
Great poem. I loved the coldest star line. It gives the great feeling of distance and unreachabiltiy]....oh I can't spell it and I'm not even sure if it's a word anyway! Unreachable will do. Propaganda in every country, I would say.
I confess I'm more of a dog than a cat person - unless they're Big cats! - but this is lovely. Effortlessly long sentences with interesting ideas like the ferry bit or the clock bit. And you've captured the rhythm of the cat's purring throughout...
What a reawakening. I liked this a lot and looked up where Tobermorey is - looks beautiful. Really liked the line about losing the arrows. Lovely ending.
I think this has struck a chord with all of us. It's very clever, seems well thought out even though you say it's automatic. I sometimes think that so many children are unhappy in school and aren't aware that each other is. It can be a cruel...
I loved this. At the moment I have a heap load of characters stuck in a tardis sized plot which is floating aimlessly through space. I am now concerned that they are all talking to each other and there is going to be some sort of rebellion and...
I loved this. Is he real? I loved the 'drank lager grew bitter'. I always like wondering what the child was llike with old people or what the old person will be like for the child and you've done the whole sweep of his life in a short, nail on...
Great poem. I loved the
Posted on Wed, 21 Feb 2018
Great poem. I loved the coldest star line. It gives the great feeling of distance and unreachabiltiy]....oh I can't spell it and I'm not even sure if it's a word anyway! Unreachable will do. Propaganda in every country, I would say.
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Fantastic simple question and
Posted on Tue, 23 Jan 2018
Fantastic simple question and answer structure and the answers are each a loaded story wanting to be told.
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I confess I'm more of a dog
Posted on Sat, 13 Jan 2018
I confess I'm more of a dog than a cat person - unless they're Big cats! - but this is lovely. Effortlessly long sentences with interesting ideas like the ferry bit or the clock bit. And you've captured the rhythm of the cat's purring throughout...
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What a reawakening. I liked
Posted on Wed, 27 Dec 2017
What a reawakening. I liked this a lot and looked up where Tobermorey is - looks beautiful. Really liked the line about losing the arrows. Lovely ending.
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I really like this - how the
Posted on Sat, 23 Dec 2017
I really like this - how the lines are spaced out, the imaginative words and how it makes you think of things.
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Really clever. I like this a
Posted on Sun, 12 Nov 2017
Really clever. I like this a lot.
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I think this has struck a
Posted on Sat, 25 Nov 2017
I think this has struck a chord with all of us. It's very clever, seems well thought out even though you say it's automatic. I sometimes think that so many children are unhappy in school and aren't aware that each other is. It can be a cruel...
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I loved this. At the moment I
Posted on Fri, 29 May 2015
I loved this. At the moment I have a heap load of characters stuck in a tardis sized plot which is floating aimlessly through space. I am now concerned that they are all talking to each other and there is going to be some sort of rebellion and...
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I loved this. Is he real? I
Posted on Mon, 23 Jan 2017
I loved this. Is he real? I loved the 'drank lager grew bitter'. I always like wondering what the child was llike with old people or what the old person will be like for the child and you've done the whole sweep of his life in a short, nail on...
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I love the stillness of this
Posted on Fri, 09 Dec 2016
I love the stillness of this and the faith of knowing something's there when you can't see it.
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