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Ode to Jonathon

By RJF on Sun, 26 Jan 2025

There’s a story that’s told among our kind; one I have heard since my youth. We all grow up with it, and know it as we know ourselves. For most, it...

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A prologue

By RJF on Sun, 24 Nov 2024

A prologue to a story I'm just starting - love to know if it makes sense, its meant to be a bit vague as will be the experience of two seperate...

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I'm glad I'm not a penguin

By RJF on Fri, 22 Nov 2024

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I'm glad I'm not a penguin Shuffling through the snow. I'm glad I'm not a penguin With no-one else to know Exactly where I'm going; Just a plan that'...

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Flesh and Blood (For 'Woke Up This Morning' Comp.)

By RJF on Fri, 06 Mar 2015

Woke up this morning with a boil on my toe. It’s an unusual place to find a boil but that’s what it was. At least, that’s what it looked like. It was...

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Bee, I havent been on ABC for

Posted on Mon, 18 May 2015

Bee, I havent been on ABC for ages ad now I have sat and read all you latest poems and prose in one go and I am absolutely stunned at your talent and your strength and the way you tell your story with a touch of humour as well as revealing the...

Posted in The Waiting Room

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Ths gave me the full on

Posted on Sat, 12 Jul 2025

Ths gave me the full on jitters - my worst nightmare! Wonderfully written, I was right there with him on the edge of that plane - and so relieved when he didnt have to jump - a lovely sense of tension and inner turmoil :)

Posted in Here I am

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Ah, this is lovely, and

Posted on Sat, 14 Jun 2025

Ah, this is lovely, and beautiful writing. I love your metaphors and you describe perfectly the familiar crisis of confidence I think anyone who writes because they can't not write understands. The random jobs resonated too - 'blood-...

Posted in Expose him to light

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A stunning piece of work, I

Posted on Fri, 16 Feb 2024

A stunning piece of work, I was right there in the woods with you, such intricate beauty described in exquisite detail - and then to be brought up short at the end with another’s reality – it took my breath away - thank you.

Posted in Two kinds of crying : 15th February 2024

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Great opeing line and first

Posted on Tue, 20 May 2025

Great opeing line and first person makes it really powerful. Emily's character really shines through, she made me smile and you evoke a time and place beautifully. Looking forward to reading part 2. Rachel

Posted in A Victorian Lady's Memoirs Part One

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Fantastic rollercoaster ride

Posted on Sat, 04 Jan 2025

Fantastic rollercoaster ride of writiing - love it. R