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Blog entryLeggings – Conversations in the Dark. maisie13 years 7 months ago
Blog entryLeggings - Another Day. maisie03 years 8 months ago
Blog entryLeggings – On yer Marks! maisie03 years 8 months ago
StoryDraft poem - It should be quiet! maisie03 years 8 months ago
Blog entryLeggings – two stories and a moment of light. maisie03 years 8 months ago
Blog entryLeggings – the next day. maisie03 years 9 months ago
Blog entryLeggings - Weird talk in M & S maisie03 years 9 months ago
Blog entryLeggings – A feeling of Relief. maisie03 years 9 months ago
Blog entryLeggings – Back to the Beginning... maisie03 years 9 months ago
Blog entryCastle Pillock: No Place Like Home airyfairy103 years 10 months ago
Blog entryLeggings - a trip to a market town. maisie13 years 10 months ago
Blog entryLeggings – the Morning Blast of Reality Radio. maisie13 years 10 months ago
Storytilly ho celticman103 years 10 months ago
StoryGoodbye Charles Strange randy-johnson33 years 10 months ago
StoryThe Pulpit of Snide (or when I became very unwell with severe depression and drug dependency, some of my closest friends shattered my heart into a million different pieces by just walking away) ralph23 years 10 months ago
Blog entryLeggings – Nightly Wakey-Wakey! maisie13 years 10 months ago
StoryThe Works Once... poem 1st draft. maisie23 years 10 months ago
Storyrainbow feeling pipkinini23 years 10 months ago
StoryDonald Trump's Head (Song) well-wisher23 years 10 months ago
StoryAll of me well-wisher13 years 10 months ago
StoryBones at the Base of the Mountain (song) StillFoundation23 years 10 months ago
Blog entryLeggings - Mad Activities! maisie13 years 10 months ago
Blog entryLeggings - Strange Requests! maisie03 years 10 months ago
Blog entryLeggings - Norwich Remembrance.... maisie23 years 11 months ago
StoryHello all, a poem! maisie53 years 11 months ago

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A Review of Anglia Square, Norwich, UK.

Anglia Square, Norwich Out of the main city Centre lies Anglia Square – home to QD and other shops – served by charity shops, and café’s and...

’Cession

’Cession ‘Cession begins, Stops the worm In the field. Stops the thought That forms endless Wheels in air. Stops the sun. The wind, the rain. Spans...

Draft poem - It should be quiet!

It would be quiet.... Except for the electronic hiss... that preludes the odd job Gods in. A virus collage in a corner blooms - Life caught in spiral...
Cherry

The Works Once... poem 1st draft.

The Works Once. I was the works once, bright, shiny, deep, took classes in earlier years, listened sweet. I spoke in five languages, heard the bird's...

Civic Duty

this is an attempt at a form, it isn't a perfect one, however I liked it, for the time being anyway.

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33 of my comments have received 31 Great Feedback votes

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Loved it for the humour and

Posted on Sat, 03 May 2014

Loved it for the humour and authenticity.  I keep on getting emails from such people, it''s a great pity they are the wrong sex and want a partner with a big one...  lol!

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Posted in A Russian Doll

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yes loved the interaction,

Posted on Mon, 28 Apr 2014

yes loved the interaction, you got so well in there, and at the end it was a surprise to find out that he did  not recall a friendship... lovely way to put thiings.

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Posted in A Weekend with Vladimir Putin

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Enjoyed, I feel you are over

Posted on Sun, 02 Feb 2014

Enjoyed, I feel you are over reaching for the sake of the rhymes through in two places.

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Posted in DRIP

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I really liked this poem, and

Posted on Thu, 26 Dec 2013

I really liked this poem, and yet wondered if it would do better broken into stanzas, especially if you were to read it aloud, a break is possible after oxygen? and then after 'past you've never shared..'

shall i shut up now>lol

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Posted in Consistence

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try awake dreaming then you

Posted on Wed, 18 Dec 2013

try awake dreaming then you have control, even if you just have enough to be able to wake up.

ps.  I like your work and have tweeted it.. :)

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Posted in Within a Dream

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I found it a bit heavy and

Posted on Wed, 04 Dec 2013

I found it a bit heavy and self opinionated to start yet at the end I was laughing and in sympathy with your character.  Nice stuff.

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Posted in IF I WERE A POLICEMAN

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happy divorce day:) sorry I 

Posted on Sun, 01 Dec 2013

happy divorce day:) sorry I  missed it.  You ditched the goat, and found your voice contemplating the loo.

lol.  I liked the poem!

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Posted in New Beginnings (I.P.)

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very vivid peice, I love the

Posted on Sun, 01 Dec 2013

very vivid peice, I love the area you chose to site it in.  Not sure if this is a real experience.  Perhaps that's the magic of this poem.  How uncertain is your reader?

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Posted in Freshwater bay (revised)

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Posted on Sun, 06 Oct 2013

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"modern" psyche's boat...
re-pickling petrified paradigms
to in vague, amber-like obeissance float"

in full flow (WHY HAVE I GOT YELLOW?)

YOU'RE BRILLIANT.  SOME OVERUSE AND REPITION NEAR TO THE START. LOL....

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Posted in a poem for professors

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enjoyed the first bit, the

Posted on Thu, 05 May 2011

enjoyed the first bit, the second bit needs improving it hasn't the swing - perhaps a rhyme might help.Read full comment

Posted in Thanks Barry

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