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Blog entryLeggings – the next day. maisie02 years 4 months ago
Blog entryLeggings - Weird talk in M & S maisie02 years 4 months ago
Blog entryLeggings – A feeling of Relief. maisie02 years 4 months ago
Blog entryLeggings – Back to the Beginning... maisie02 years 5 months ago
StoryMANCHESTER UNITED'S DARKEST HOUR BIGGUS42 years 5 months ago
Blog entryCastle Pillock: No Place Like Home airyfairy102 years 5 months ago
Blog entryLeggings - a trip to a market town. maisie12 years 5 months ago
Blog entryLeggings – the Morning Blast of Reality Radio. maisie12 years 5 months ago
Storytilly ho celticman102 years 5 months ago
StoryGoodbye Charles Strange randy-johnson32 years 5 months ago
StoryThe Pulpit of Snide (or when I became very unwell with severe depression and drug dependency, some of my closest friends shattered my heart into a million different pieces by just walking away) ralph22 years 5 months ago
Blog entryLeggings – Nightly Wakey-Wakey! maisie12 years 5 months ago
StoryThe Works Once... poem 1st draft. maisie22 years 5 months ago
StoryBUT SOFTLY THE MYRIAD SNOW FLAKES FALL BIGGUS22 years 5 months ago
StoryChoice Tales from the Vale – (192) The Ginger Amazon and the Tent Pole (Part 01) BIGGUS22 years 5 months ago
Storyrainbow feeling pipkinini22 years 5 months ago
StoryDonald Trump's Head (Song) well-wisher22 years 5 months ago
StoryAll of me well-wisher12 years 5 months ago
StoryBones at the Base of the Mountain (song) StillFoundation22 years 5 months ago
StoryMy Dad, the ringer. Canonette222 years 6 months ago
Blog entryLeggings - Mad Activities! maisie12 years 6 months ago
Blog entryLeggings - Strange Requests! maisie02 years 6 months ago
Blog entryLeggings - Norwich Remembrance.... maisie22 years 6 months ago
StoryHello all, a poem! maisie52 years 6 months ago
Blog entryLeggings – over Christmas and New Year. maisie02 years 6 months ago

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Cherry

The Works Once... poem 1st draft.

The Works Once. I was the works once, bright, shiny, deep, took classes in earlier years, listened sweet. I spoke in five languages, heard the bird's...

Civic Duty

this is an attempt at a form, it isn't a perfect one, however I liked it, for the time being anyway.

Second You. Tube piece....

from "Brantley Goes Home!"

You Tube and back ground.

I'm looking towards You tube and performance due to a chap on here who does it! (blame him)

Hello all, a poem!

very rough, very much last night.... not edited. be warned...

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35 of my comments have received 33 Great Feedback votes

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lol

Posted on Thu, 08 May 2014

I'm concerned about the leggy jumper?   is this a real jumper?  mine only have arms...lol!

plus some of the descriptions of the doggies shortness - a vertical disability -are over emphasised and read a little bit clumsy and I personally...

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Posted in Small Secrets

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I really like the flow that

Posted on Sat, 03 May 2014

I really like the flow that you've put into this paragraph poem.  I do feel however to improve it you should take some time to read it aloud to yourself, then you can hear/feel/see where you can make your poem work much smoother.  You will find...

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Posted in The Happiness is Arriving

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Loved it for the humour and

Posted on Sat, 03 May 2014

Loved it for the humour and authenticity.  I keep on getting emails from such people, it''s a great pity they are the wrong sex and want a partner with a big one...  lol!

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Posted in A Russian Doll

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yes loved the interaction,

Posted on Mon, 28 Apr 2014

yes loved the interaction, you got so well in there, and at the end it was a surprise to find out that he did  not recall a friendship... lovely way to put thiings.

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Posted in A Weekend with Vladimir Putin

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Enjoyed, I feel you are over

Posted on Sun, 02 Feb 2014

Enjoyed, I feel you are over reaching for the sake of the rhymes through in two places.

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Posted in DRIP

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I really liked this poem, and

Posted on Thu, 26 Dec 2013

I really liked this poem, and yet wondered if it would do better broken into stanzas, especially if you were to read it aloud, a break is possible after oxygen? and then after 'past you've never shared..'

shall i shut up now>lol

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Posted in Consistence

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try awake dreaming then you

Posted on Wed, 18 Dec 2013

try awake dreaming then you have control, even if you just have enough to be able to wake up.

ps.  I like your work and have tweeted it.. :)

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Posted in Within a Dream

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I found it a bit heavy and

Posted on Wed, 04 Dec 2013

I found it a bit heavy and self opinionated to start yet at the end I was laughing and in sympathy with your character.  Nice stuff.

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Posted in IF I WERE A POLICEMAN

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happy divorce day:) sorry I 

Posted on Sun, 01 Dec 2013

happy divorce day:) sorry I  missed it.  You ditched the goat, and found your voice contemplating the loo.

lol.  I liked the poem!

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Posted in New Beginnings (I.P.)

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very vivid peice, I love the

Posted on Sun, 01 Dec 2013

very vivid peice, I love the area you chose to site it in.  Not sure if this is a real experience.  Perhaps that's the magic of this poem.  How uncertain is your reader?

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Posted in Freshwater bay (revised)

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