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My stories

Stories of East Sussex

Long ago, when I was a child, there were two sets of people living in the Crowborough area of East Sussex who were very different to the normal human...

Trees

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Trees The trees stand at the edge of the garden fenced off from the Nature reserve. Tall thin red branched trees, slowly turning to brown. The spring...

Knowledge

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please forgive me this one, its ages since I tried to write a poem, and this is the first real try out of my new computer - so.... Knowledge. It's...

Leggings - the wild wake up!

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Do you recall ever waking up as a child, from an uncertain dream. Fighting a monster in a dark place? I just did. About 01.30 hours, when my QD chill...

Codes.

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The Code. I awoke one morning On my forearms the code Of imprisonment and remembrance Came nearly intact to the surface. I wasn't sure if it was for...

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34 of my comments have received 32 Great Feedback votes

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its a haiku stream....

Posted on Fri, 12 Aug 2016

thank you.  I love the haiku.. and the tanka greatly :) 

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Posted in Coffee Moon Haiku Set

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claps :)

Posted on Wed, 09 Dec 2015

very nicely done, i thought that quote was down to a boxer...  I stand corrected.

thank you for sharing.

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Posted in This Isn't a Dummy Run...

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very nice...

Posted on Sun, 13 Sep 2015

thank you I enjoyed.

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Posted in Heavy Blow

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bravo!

Posted on Thu, 27 Aug 2015

lovely :)

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Posted in Through fragrant Esplanades

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yes minimal poetry.

Posted on Wed, 26 Aug 2015

Nicely done, reads very well. 

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Posted in Five Days a Week

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loved the first stanza

Posted on Sat, 15 Aug 2015

not sure about the second one.  'Things' too vague. 

also '

As not-quite-water

Seeps out through the water. '    what does this mean?     The end of the poem should be satisfying it should conclude....   this fails to do this...

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Posted in Holes in the bag.

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I fear this falls short

Posted on Fri, 17 Jul 2015

of what it could be.  You need to carefully edit for places where when read aloud it doesn't run right.

things like: 'Did you watch us with your lamp-like eyes'  to 'Did you watch with lamp-like eyes'

which makes it more direct and...

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Posted in Mirror Angels - re-written

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I like this

Posted on Fri, 17 Jul 2015

you need to edit carefully now, and it should be perfect.

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Posted in Upon The Beach

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i write on trains too...

Posted on Fri, 06 Jun 2014

I like your focus in this peice.  it's clear and very sharp.

 

have you seen this?

http://www....

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Posted in Train Journeys

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lol

Posted on Thu, 08 May 2014

I'm concerned about the leggy jumper?   is this a real jumper?  mine only have arms...lol!

plus some of the descriptions of the doggies shortness - a vertical disability -are over emphasised and read a little bit clumsy and I personally...

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Posted in Small Secrets

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