I want I was I am Scratchin in a Sally Army that echoes like a tin can Drinkin the final day Gold star for being clean The obsession standoffish the...
I poke and pick and ease my tongue into a hole where a tooth should be, but that doesn’t stop me smiling when the day shift lets go of me. I take the...
Homes built by spread sheets Sterling flows half-level to half level Splitsection soundaspace Stuck-up tower blocks. Designed by gods Jean or Jacques...
the sun brings its own medicine and this seems ancient and modern. The phrase, 'for wounded, beyond make mend' is slightly clumsy. I know what you mean, but simpler with 'beyond mend'.
nicely done, very visual and
Posted on Thu, 07 Dec 2017
nicely done, very visual and acoustic.
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Mark the might mouse is a bit
Posted on Tue, 02 Jan 2018
Mark the might mouse is a bit of a spellbinder. I hope he doesn't overdo it with the catnip.
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we live we die and wonder why
Posted on Fri, 29 Dec 2017
we live we die and wonder why. I don't know, but nearer the end than the begining is a trend.
Read full commentPosted in The Search for Meaning
yeh, shades of snow and ice
Posted on Mon, 18 Dec 2017
yeh, shades of snow and ice and all things nice, but a message too, not long for you.
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nice eyes don't grow old they
Posted on Wed, 06 Dec 2017
nice eyes don't grow old they just lose a bit of twinkle.
Read full commentPosted in You had such nice eyes
where are our friends,.
Posted on Wed, 06 Dec 2017
where are our friends,. indeed?
Read full commentPosted in Touch Me Not
nicely done. grown-ups are
Posted on Sat, 11 Nov 2017
nicely done. grown-ups are weird. That's why I refuse to grow up.
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nice rhyme for halloween is
Posted on Mon, 30 Oct 2017
nice rhyme for halloween is ghostly time.
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I guess with hpyerbole and
Posted on Thu, 26 Oct 2017
I guess with hpyerbole and hyperreality sometimes we forget we're not always right.
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the sun brings its own
Posted on Thu, 26 Oct 2017
the sun brings its own medicine and this seems ancient and modern. The phrase, 'for wounded, beyond make mend' is slightly clumsy. I know what you mean, but simpler with 'beyond mend'.
Read full commentPosted in Broken
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