NINE YEARS AND FOURTEEN DAYS (9.534) after his arrival -- a Thursday -- Aaron returned to his couch, the exotic flavour of Puff-Bix lingering on his...
A tongue-in-cheek story about an over populated technological world in two parts (updated from a previous post) ------ Ouroboros symbol from Wiki Commons
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Hello Poppy
Posted on Sat, 21 Oct 2017
I found it so sad to see your note about lack of comments. However don't be disheartened, the number of comments you have been getting is pretty much the norm, quite close to average for most of us I'm afraid. Comments don't flow easily here,...
The politicians have brainwashed the British people.
Posted on Fri, 16 Jun 2017
it all started in the UK with Thatcher who taught the people taxes are bad. That's bullshit. Taxes pay for the things we need when the going gets tough. Properly used taxes enrich everybody not just the chosen few.
Having read 30 and then 31, I see how well they fit together like pieces of a jigsaw.
30 starts off slow and seems to move up a notch as the alohol takes hold. By 31 the the pace has quicked and continues to wind up until you get to the...
but they always seemed to enjoy being the centre of attention. I guess Brian is a one off. Interesting read, I don't know how you can come up with so many good ideas.
I know how much time and effort it takes to write a story, I hope you...
However, I was kind of disappointed you changed the opening para from just meat to like he's meat. I found the change dilutes the impact. It may well be incongruous, but I feel the flat statement 'Just meat' somehow sums up a bored dog's...
Hello Poppy
Posted on Sat, 21 Oct 2017
I found it so sad to see your note about lack of comments. However don't be disheartened, the number of comments you have been getting is pretty much the norm, quite close to average for most of us I'm afraid. Comments don't flow easily here,...
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The politicians have brainwashed the British people.
Posted on Fri, 16 Jun 2017
it all started in the UK with Thatcher who taught the people taxes are bad. That's bullshit. Taxes pay for the things we need when the going gets tough. Properly used taxes enrich everybody not just the chosen few.
Read full commentPosted in Politicians
Lovely as the sunset, Rhia!!!!
Posted on Wed, 17 May 2017
Posted in Swallowed up?
Very clever writing,Jack
Posted on Tue, 21 Feb 2017
Having read 30 and then 31, I see how well they fit together like pieces of a jigsaw.
30 starts off slow and seems to move up a notch as the alohol takes hold. By 31 the the pace has quicked and continues to wind up until you get to the...
Read full commentPosted in grimms31
There are some great stories in Spanish folklore
Posted on Sat, 12 Nov 2016
I know it is your chosen country and I don't blame you, they are lovely people. You have certainly captured the mindset of local Spain.
(I spent a lot of time in the Canaries and Island rivalries are as intense as the regional ones in the...
Read full commentPosted in A Miracle in Villablanco
Hello Joe, I've met people a bit like Brian
Posted on Fri, 11 Nov 2016
but they always seemed to enjoy being the centre of attention. I guess Brian is a one off. Interesting read, I don't know how you can come up with so many good ideas.
I know how much time and effort it takes to write a story, I hope you...
Read full commentPosted in Brians Gift.
Dark days ahead
Posted on Thu, 10 Nov 2016
The Bear is licking his lips.
How long before he goes is search
of honey in the fields of golden stars
on blue abandoned by red stripes
and red crosses on white?
The cost of turning your backs...
Read full commentPosted in Dream On
You make a good point, however
Posted on Tue, 25 Oct 2016
I think: "very convenient for Charles" a better line (but it doesn't rhyme)
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Read full commentPosted in DIANA PRINCESS OF WALES
Very magnetic piece this, London
Posted on Thu, 21 Jul 2016
However, I was kind of disappointed you changed the opening para from just meat to like he's meat. I found the change dilutes the impact. It may well be incongruous, but I feel the flat statement 'Just meat' somehow sums up a bored dog's...
Read full commentPosted in Dogs
Bissextile Buffoon
Posted on Thu, 30 Jun 2016
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