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The Last Christmas (Part One of Two)
The Last Christmas (Part One of Two) Ali sat stoically in his Toyota Prius, the engine ticking over as he waited. He would take a cigarette break at...
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Mid-Winter
Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/mid-winter-mp3 Mid-Winter Constellations whisper in aphonic skies, a myriad of stars on dark...
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The Last Wish of Christmas
The Last Wish of Christmas Fate unwinds its own path. The truth is, I haven’t always been a dog. Appearances can be deceptive. The lights from the...
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Memories from Falls Past
Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/memories-from-falls-past-mp3 Memories from Falls Past Mist falling in dank layers, enveloping...
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The Last Door
“One should die proudly when it is no longer possible to live proudly.” Friedrich Nietzsche The Last Door The moon shone in a pitch-black sky, its...
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It's a busy agenda isn't it?
Posted on Mon, 03 Feb 2025
It's a busy agenda isn't it? So many lands to conquer. MAGA MEGA etc
Alfred asks the questions and we ponder the answers. Thought provoking, of course.
Read full commentPosted in Trump’s Inauguration Hot Air Balloon! By Alfred N.Muggins
The strange thing about Trump
Posted on Wed, 29 Jan 2025
The strange thing about Trump's reelection (at least for me) is him surviving assassination attemps. I honestly think that lots of people genuinely believe that it was divine intervention and crystalised his gains following the woeful display of...
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That's an absorbing poem,
Posted on Mon, 27 Jan 2025
That's an absorbing poem, Rhiannon.
I am off to do some research as this is just my kind of thing.
Nicely done :)
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'It says here that they are
Posted on Fri, 24 Jan 2025
'It says here that they are plugging themselves into electric car chargers to get high.’
That's quite an image to finish with! Ooh...feral robots. This is an interesting turn of events.
Looking forward to the road trip to find...
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for You - Part 49
Yes, those photos are
Posted on Tue, 21 Jan 2025
Yes, those photos are gorgeous.
I enjoyed another ramble with you, Rhiannon.
You appear blessed with wonderful countryside where you live.
Just beautiful.
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I think Alfred should run in
Posted on Sun, 19 Jan 2025
I think Alfred should run in the next elections. The electoral vote has never been more splintered so he would be in with a chance. I'm sure he would rule sagely after learning lessons from history.
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Thanks, Di. It's based on a
Posted on Tue, 14 Jan 2025
Thanks, Di. It's based on a ghost walk I did in York a few years ago. So mostly real events.
[Left you a message on FB Messenger a little while ago. So sorry to hear about your mum]
Read full commentPosted in The Golden Fleece (Ghost Walk) Part One of Two
I like the change in tone. It
Posted on Thu, 16 Jan 2025
I like the change in tone. It's gone from humour to mystery/suspense in just a few paragraphs.
The truth is out there/Spencer is out there.
What will happen?
Read on and we all will!
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for You - Part 48
These characters feel like
Posted on Sat, 11 Jan 2025
These characters feel like old friends having read the book. You weave the complexity of relationships with the wonder of magic so adeptly.
I guess that can be the beauty of writing - a world we can escape to for a while.
Keep going...
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More drama so deftly done.
Posted on Fri, 10 Jan 2025
More drama so deftly done. You build the tension so well whilst at the same time keeping the humour going.
I hope you get to the end and publish. I can see the final product having a broad appeal so potentially a big audience.
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