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In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Two of Six)
Part One at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/vale-shadow-king-part-one-six In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Two of Six) Standing in...
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In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part One of Six)
In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part One of Six) Billy Williams had always wondered what is was about his grandparents’ house. He had been visiting...
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A Lamentation of Bees
Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/a-lamentation-of-bees-mp3 A Lamentation of Bees Shafts of sunlight glinting, autumn breezes...
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Does it Rain in Heaven?
Watching someone close to you leave Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/does-it-rain-in-heaven-mp3 Does it rain in Heaven? Night...
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Charmed (Part Two of Two)
Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/charmed-part-two Part one at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/charmed-part-one-two...
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I enjoy Alfred digressing. It
Posted on Sun, 15 Dec 2024
I enjoy Alfred digressing. It's always an interesting read. Definitely don't side with Putin and his cronies. We have the lesser of the evils in the West. Just about.
Read full commentPosted in Caring For All The Animals (Including Humans!) and Avoiding World War 3! By Alfred N.Muggins
Well you certainly brought
Posted on Sun, 15 Dec 2024
Well you certainly brought that very special bird to life in verse, Jenny.
Adriotly done with vivid imagery.
Lovely stuff :)
Read full commentPosted in The Bower Flame Bird
'dribble' 'drabble' and
Posted on Wed, 11 Dec 2024
'dribble' 'drabble' and 'trabble'. Who knew? Every day is a school day!
Hope you get your Christmas cards finished :)
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"Fading into night, stars
Posted on Sat, 07 Dec 2024
"Fading into night, stars
intrinsic to space and time
twinkle.."
There's a tale of passion, Jenny. Adriotly crafted and poetically narrated.
I love the imagery, as ever.
Of course...I'm left wondering if it's...
Read full commentPosted in Stormy Night Of Passion
Free markets economics v
Posted on Sun, 08 Dec 2024
Free markets economics v state controlled. Neither works in their purest form. The solution lies in an appropriate mix. In the meantime, we all just try and do the best we can to get through it.
Read full commentPosted in Party Election Leaflets : Delivering Economic Stability? By Alfred N.Muggins
A belated happy birthday.
Posted on Tue, 10 Dec 2024
A belated happy birthday.
Yes, I enjoyed looking at those photos as I have on Instagram. You have a keen eye for an interesting shot.
Your love of Europe..and Bulgaria shines through (the rain).
Another insightful, accessible...
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Read both parts. Really
Posted on Tue, 03 Dec 2024
Read both parts. Really enjoyed. You have left it in a way that it could be added to.
Of course, an important underlying message about the environment but delivered in a way that avoids sledgehammer lack of subtlety. Let the reader absorb...
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Gloriously surreal with an
Posted on Sat, 30 Nov 2024
Gloriously surreal with an important underlying message. You write in first person so well. A pleasure to read.
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A deftly crafted elegy of
Posted on Mon, 02 Dec 2024
A deftly crafted elegy of sorts. I imagine this was a real person?
There's a lot going on between these lines underpinned by your trademark humour. I could touch and feel the conflicting emotions largely driven by religious undertones....
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Loved the ending, Jenny.
Posted on Tue, 03 Dec 2024
Loved the ending, Jenny.
A message for our time. Environment over greed.
If everyone followed this mantra, the world would be a much better place!
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