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An elderly dream
She sat in her chair and thought and planned a lovely vacation – the preparation expectation anticipation; she wrote and she booked (confused, they...
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“The people who walked in darkness …
… have seen a great light.” Isaiah 9:2 [Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] When darkness grips and happiness slips a Word of light guides in the...
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Glinting Diamonds Everywhere!
Hoar frost glitters …
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Stone him!!
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Stephen, full of faith and wisdom, disputed, argued cogently, exasperating his oppressors who accused...
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How does it do it?
What a wonderful thing is the human nose! detecting as up through its tubes the air goes, the scent of the lavender when the breeze blows, and so...
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You describe the sensation of
Posted on Tue, 19 Aug 2025
You describe the sensation of fog walking well. I don't think I've been out walking in real fog for many years! Is the Napoleonic fort you mention the same as the Brean fort he is at?
One thing: From this point, the nearest island...
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I enjoyed the dreaminess of
Posted on Thu, 14 Aug 2025
I enjoyed the dreaminess of looking at the sky above, and imagining swimming in its beauty, on a warm day, relaxing.
Took a bit longer to think of the rest of your dreaminess. I imagine the relaxation of the lovely day, the silence and...
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Quite apart from where your
Posted on Wed, 13 Aug 2025
Quite apart from where your bigger story is going, this is an interesting exploration of how boys, maybe having been bulllied, venturing in, egging each other on, into flexing their bullying muscles, and how easily it can escalate to their harm...
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So difficult to describe
Posted on Wed, 13 Aug 2025
So difficult to describe those swirling hues! draped and languorous seem good adjectives.
Seems odd to connect them to watching angels servants, but I see the imagery can be thought of that way, Rhiannon
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She certainly seemed to have
Posted on Mon, 11 Aug 2025
She certainly seemed to have been very pleased to meet you. My first contact here on the site with her was when one of my very early pieces I posted was 'Seashore' for kids, and she made a nice comment! Rhiannon
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Well drawn. I just
Posted on Sat, 09 Aug 2025
Well drawn. I just happeed to be reading a little detective story a couple of days ago that had a similar situation very unexpected so I did suddenly suspect, but not long before the end! Rhiannon
PS I thought the concept of 'I want my...
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Must have been hard for your
Posted on Thu, 07 Aug 2025
Must have been hard for your mother. She sounds very committed to you over it. Rhiannon
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that's thoughtful. Of course,
Posted on Thu, 07 Aug 2025
that's thoughtful. Of course, sometimes, it works the other way too — the one feeling sensitive is unconsciously misjudging others herself too! Need encouragement to show interest and find that helps others to show interest in them. Rhiannon
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Very visual, relaxing scene!
Posted on Tue, 05 Aug 2025
Very visual, relaxing scene! Rhiannon
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What a lovely place to be,
Posted on Tue, 05 Aug 2025
What a lovely place to be, what a lovely walk! And all recorded in mind and paper/computer. Thank you. Rhiannon
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