Yellow – gold – Orange – red, Falling to earth With clarity Of rest, Naked branches Are silhouetted Bandaged in bark, Some dead wood Cracks and snaps...
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Hi Jane,
Posted on Thu, 28 Mar 2024
Hi Jane,
when I was going through the menapause, I was working in a factory. I would get so embarrassed because my face would flush bright red when I got nervous, or if someone came over and spoke to me I would have no control. So my only...
It sounds like you had an invigorating walk. The scenery looked so inviting with those black mountains in the distant east. The frisky lambs must have been a pleasure to come across too.
we live in a crazy technological world that I myself cannot grasp, so I really feel for you. I always have to give my partner's mobile phone number for any deliverys or information as I don't have a mobile phone. I know it...
Now I wonder what's coming next in Cheshire for Josiah and Archibald! A new adventure for our intrepid twosome who are always ready for another undertaking! If you'll pardon the pun. ...
Poor Vanessa, Annie is dynamic, which makes the story so real. It's so true to life, because I remember when I was young and how returning from travels abroad I'd be full of enthusiasm and wishing my parents would travel more. I have to say I do...
Hi Jane,
Posted on Thu, 28 Mar 2024
Hi Jane,
when I was going through the menapause, I was working in a factory. I would get so embarrassed because my face would flush bright red when I got nervous, or if someone came over and spoke to me I would have no control. So my only...
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It sounds like you had an
Posted on Tue, 26 Mar 2024
It sounds like you had an invigorating walk. The scenery looked so inviting with those black mountains in the distant east. The frisky lambs must have been a pleasure to come across too.
Lovely to read and imagine being there too.
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Hi Maxine,
Posted on Sat, 23 Mar 2024
Hi Maxine,
we live in a crazy technological world that I myself cannot grasp, so I really feel for you. I always have to give my partner's mobile phone number for any deliverys or information as I don't have a mobile phone. I know it...
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Now I wonder what's coming
Posted on Fri, 22 Mar 2024
Now I wonder what's coming next in Cheshire for Josiah and Archibald! A new adventure for our intrepid twosome who are always ready for another undertaking! If you'll pardon the pun. ...
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Hello William,
Posted on Thu, 21 Mar 2024
Hello William,
this is such kind feedback and a true honour to receive. It's always nice to connect with readers and know a poem has worked.
So much gratitude for your kind words and many thanks.
Jenny.
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Poor Vanessa, Annie is
Posted on Wed, 20 Mar 2024
Poor Vanessa, Annie is dynamic, which makes the story so real. It's so true to life, because I remember when I was young and how returning from travels abroad I'd be full of enthusiasm and wishing my parents would travel more. I have to say I do...
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Mysterious is the silver moon
Posted on Wed, 20 Mar 2024
Mysterious is the silver moon. You bring her to life with this slightly heartbreaking but beautifully crafted poem Paul.
Jenny.
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A dazzling display in words
Posted on Mon, 18 Mar 2024
A dazzling display in words Rhiannon.You captured all the beauty of Spring.
Jenny.
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A captivating read Penny, you
Posted on Sun, 17 Mar 2024
A captivating read Penny, you've enchanted me as a reader.
Jenny.
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Just finished reading this
Posted on Fri, 15 Mar 2024
Just finished reading this free style way of writing. I think you've found your niche. I agree with insert this would be entertaining read aloud.
Jenny.
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