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As well as the wonderful descriptions you get in these poems, they are always so well constructed, so that the way the words are used, as much as the words themselves, help the reader to see what you see. Another beauty, Rhiannon.
I am Delilah, and this is being typed by the servant of myself and Zsa Zsa. I have a new game for Omar. Get your local vet to put either you or Mitsie on special expensive food that only the one of you is supposed to have, and then swap bowls...
Some very striking imagery - the one that stood out for me was the passage comparing Joanie's voice to a shotgun, 'her words repeating until the cartridge emptied, until her words were simple, hollow clicks.' I wasn't too sure about some of the...
There's a lot of passion and a lot of wisdom in this. I loved reading it, but it also made me uncomfortable, and I mean that as a compliment. One that stays with the reader.
Wonderful, Jane! How I wish I'd had the guts to do that to some of my old bosses, with the support of that mischief-making spirit. A really enjoyable read.
I lived in Irwin Avenue, just off Dodsworth, for over twenty years before I moved to my present abode. My kids grew up there, and cut their adolescent teeth on illicit White Lightning, cigs and snogs in Doddy Ave Park (yes kids, mummy knew). I...
Another great episode, Penny.
Posted on Sun, 13 Oct 2019
Another great episode, Penny. The trees were my favourite bit too. Trees are indeed the guardians of our world.
I really like the way, in this story, kindness given brings kindness back. It's a lovely message.
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I'm with you on this one.
Posted on Wed, 02 Oct 2019
I'm with you on this one. The only place grey looks magnificent is on an elephant.
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As well as the wonderful
Posted on Thu, 09 May 2019
As well as the wonderful descriptions you get in these poems, they are always so well constructed, so that the way the words are used, as much as the words themselves, help the reader to see what you see. Another beauty, Rhiannon.
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I really enjoyed this, and
Posted on Fri, 03 May 2019
I really enjoyed this, and then reading about the background to it made it even more poignant. What a wonderful memorial to your relative.
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I am Delilah, and this is
Posted on Sun, 26 Aug 2018
I am Delilah, and this is being typed by the servant of myself and Zsa Zsa. I have a new game for Omar. Get your local vet to put either you or Mitsie on special expensive food that only the one of you is supposed to have, and then swap bowls...
Read full commentPosted in Omar's Diary - Sunday 26th August 2018
More than one journey is
Posted on Sun, 04 Dec 2016
More than one journey is explored in this wonderful exploration of pain and hope. That's why it's our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day!
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Some very striking imagery -
Posted on Thu, 18 Jun 2015
Some very striking imagery - the one that stood out for me was the passage comparing Joanie's voice to a shotgun, 'her words repeating until the cartridge emptied, until her words were simple, hollow clicks.' I wasn't too sure about some of the...
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There's a lot of passion and
Posted on Thu, 25 Jun 2026
There's a lot of passion and a lot of wisdom in this. I loved reading it, but it also made me uncomfortable, and I mean that as a compliment. One that stays with the reader.
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Wonderful, Jane! How I wish I
Posted on Wed, 24 Jun 2026
Wonderful, Jane! How I wish I'd had the guts to do that to some of my old bosses, with the support of that mischief-making spirit. A really enjoyable read.
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I lived in Irwin Avenue, just
Posted on Wed, 24 Jun 2026
I lived in Irwin Avenue, just off Dodsworth, for over twenty years before I moved to my present abode. My kids grew up there, and cut their adolescent teeth on illicit White Lightning, cigs and snogs in Doddy Ave Park (yes kids, mummy knew). I...
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