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My stories

Perspective

It's not the destination.
Gold cherry

Amy Amy Amy

Sailor-tat marionette a fag-end fishwife with your filthy laugh and oiled piston hips, a hot, wet Minnie Mouse. Gutter mouth.

Hot Mommas

For all the mombies and their lost minds, I’ll tell you now – you’re doing fine.
Cherry

Our Neil

Not sure if this works better as poetry or prose.
Cherry

Our Neil

Not sure if this works better as poetry or prose.

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126 of my comments have received 128 Great Feedback votes

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I enjoyed this. I'll be going

Posted on Mon, 04 May 2015

I enjoyed this. I'll be going back to read the rest. What a strong start 'For generations the people of Kierton - most knowingly, some less so - had danced precariously on the edge of a blade' and doesn't let up from there. Technically accurate...

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Posted in The Fifth Star - Chapter 15 (1/2) - In Ruin

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Some beautiful parts here. I

Posted on Thu, 30 Apr 2015

Some beautiful parts here. I especially enjoyed:

'for me the tree sways not only for breeze

but to atone for time'

- a gorgeous, epic line I keep coming back to.

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Posted in An Uneasy Truce

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I'm always glad to see poets

Posted on Sat, 04 Apr 2015

I'm always glad to see poets playing with their structureing and I think the left aligned interjections here work well - made me read them in a different voice.

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Posted in Inner child

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This is so powerful. Pulls no

Posted on Thu, 03 Apr 2014

This is so powerful. Pulls no punches right to the bitter end. Thank you for sharing this - it couldn't have been easy but it is a wonderful tribute. Forgive me if this is too forward, but I think she would have been proud.

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Posted in Today I Wrote a Poem

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I would never have through to

Posted on Tue, 17 Feb 2015

I would never have thought to move so swiftly from the cheek to the tap but it does add a needed echo: a heartbeat.

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Posted in His Father's Eyes

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You tell stories so well

Posted on Mon, 16 Feb 2015

You tell stories so well through a series of pungent images.

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Posted in To a Cherry Tree

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Agree with insert.. here.

Posted on Tue, 27 Jan 2015

Agree with insert.. here. Pared down style works as there is no need to dress up this subject matter. It all still remains incomprehensible to me. I went to a holding camp in Prague and saw pictures drawn by children of smiling Nazi guards.

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Posted in Ashes

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Nice.

Posted on Mon, 19 Jan 2015

Nice.

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Posted in HD

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I enjoyed the symbolism here.

Posted on Sat, 20 Dec 2014

I enjoyed the symbolism here. A wall's a big thing and between the 'gathering darkness' and the 'inhumanity' your character makes a dent. I also appreciate your lack of adjectives describing the  wall. It would have been a bit cheap to try to...

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Posted in 25 Years After

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