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| Type | Title | Author | Replies | Last updated |
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| Collection | The songs of Finn and the Fiánna. | london_calling79 | 0 | 7 years 3 weeks ago |
| Story | Thursday | stevepoet | 2 | 7 years 3 weeks ago |
| Story | The Things That You Are | stevepoet | 1 | 7 years 3 weeks ago |
| Story | Promises Beyond The Veil Of Life ( PT 42 ) | skinner_jennifer | 13 | 7 years 1 month ago |
| Story | Forwards | love_writing | 11 | 7 years 1 month ago |
| Story | Not One Punch | forest_for_ever | 3 | 7 years 1 month ago |
| Story | Firenight | rosaliekempthorne | 3 | 7 years 1 month ago |
| Story | The right | Jamie Sykes | 2 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Trees | Jamie Sykes | 6 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Brooklyn Heart | Michael Valentine | 6 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | If Money Was No Object | luigi_pagano | 5 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Early Morning Train | hudsonmoon | 17 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Things I have done since he left | winking_tiger | 5 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | The Cleaners | socialeaf | 12 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Remnants | winking_tiger | 1 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Tribute to Bee | Deliberately Ev... | 13 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | I Am here | Vareth | 3 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | My Final Masterpiece | dystopic.anon | 6 | 7 years 3 months ago |
| Story | the gothic line | celticman | 2 | 7 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Dust Never Settles | berenerchamion | 8 | 7 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Distance | Parson Thru | 26 | 7 years 3 months ago |
| Story | going extinct | JupiterMoon | 5 | 7 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Mad Poetry - Four | Suchitra Manpuri | 2 | 7 years 3 months ago |
| Story | iGrasshopper | iDrew | 2 | 7 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Please don't tell me I am mediocre | YaseminB | 3 | 7 years 4 months ago |







I think there's loads to love
Posted on Thu, 07 Jul 2016
I think there's loads to love in here. One bit I thought you could change would be
'With a certainty
Of knowledge
Which ironically
Belies her
Relatively minimal
Years.'
In my opinion it's a little...
Read full commentPosted in Her
This is beautiful! Such sharp
Posted on Sat, 02 Jul 2016
This is beautiful! Such sharp lines and juxtaposing images left me emotionally battered and bruised. Great work!
Read full commentPosted in La Boisselle (Raprochement)
Such a powerful, guttural,
Posted on Mon, 04 Jul 2016
Such a powerful, guttural, earthy sound to this poem. Beautiful words and harsh sounds capture the wild wonderfully well.
Read full commentPosted in The Begwns*
Fire warms and fire burns. I
Posted on Sat, 30 Apr 2016
Fire warms and fire burns. I like the way you've played with this and the demonisation of Nero when he was perhaps doing Rome a favour!
Read full commentPosted in Prometheus's Legacy
Full of sharp lines and sharp
Posted on Sun, 13 Mar 2016
Full of sharp lines and sharp, sticky textures. A tasty slice of the past.
Read full commentPosted in New Beginnings (IP)
Pace and plot are perfect. I
Posted on Sat, 27 Feb 2016
Pace and plot are perfect. I've just messaged two old friends.
Read full commentPosted in old stock
I really like the idea and
Posted on Sat, 27 Feb 2016
I really like the idea and the flowing structure which is interrupted in the middle. I think the last line needs work to really finish it off with the power it has begun with.
Read full commentPosted in Memory
The rhyming couplets are a
Posted on Sun, 14 Feb 2016
The rhyming couplets are a nice touch to add to the romance. A few more syllables per line and a shift in the couplets - you would have a neat sonnet here.
Read full commentPosted in The moon in the man
I don't know the hymn but the
Posted on Sun, 14 Feb 2016
I don't know the hymn but the words here are very powerful and proud. I'm particularly fond of the 'revealing faith he’d learnt in tears' line. Such a story there.
Read full commentPosted in King David’s Struggles
A lovely perspective.
Posted on Sun, 14 Feb 2016
A lovely perspective. 'Quietly seed-feeding' is a standout line.
Read full commentPosted in Splendid Blue
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