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| Type | Title | Author | Replies | Last updated |
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| Story | Teen Training! | Rhiannonw | 10 | 8 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Before The Cake | Lou Blodgett | 2 | 8 years 2 months ago |
| Story | What I Learned | Richard L. Prov... | 3 | 8 years 2 months ago |
| Story | When A Father Leaves | Chessnut Eyes | 1 | 8 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Where I Belong | D Marie | 3 | 8 years 2 months ago |
| Story | The Love Addict | H. B. Woodrose | 2 | 8 years 2 months ago |
| Story | The Worst Part .. | va-nessa | 1 | 8 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Breaking The Silence | D Marie | 9 | 8 years 2 months ago |
| Story | End of the World | Rishire | 4 | 8 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Murder at the Feast, The Treachery of Scone | Angusfolklore | 3 | 8 years 2 months ago |
| Story | This Beeston Morning | ralph | 6 | 8 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Them | london_calling79 | 4 | 8 years 2 months ago |
| Story | HD | pepsoid | 2 | 8 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Romance Killer | socialeaf | 15 | 8 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Calvary | mcscraic | 2 | 8 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Nothing's Happening | Jane Hyphen | 10 | 8 years 4 months ago |
| Story | Collaboration | bosch | 8 | 8 years 4 months ago |
| Story | Angela | jem | 5 | 8 years 4 months ago |
| Story | My Ol' Man's Freezer Video | hudsonmoon | 10 | 8 years 4 months ago |
| Story | The Hearts Of Politicians | well-wisher | 2 | 8 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Black Cross (Chapter Seven) | Voodoun Romance | 2 | 8 years 5 months ago |
| Story | The Curious Lamentation of Daisy Namatjira | Petrice | 2 | 8 years 5 months ago |
| Story | god and mothers (a rambling) | iwylie | 5 | 8 years 5 months ago |
| Story | On this day the 7th of April | Poette | 3 | 8 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Dreams | mcscraic | 2 | 8 years 5 months ago |






Yet love
Posted on Fri, 10 Jul 2015
Yet love
was like a light flurry of snow
never deep enough to lay new paths
What a stunning image a gorgeous poem.
Read full commentPosted in Fleeting fantasies
A beautifully described
Posted on Fri, 10 Jul 2015
A beautifully described falling apart. Hermetically sealed, clipped up and washed down with antibiotics.
Read full commentPosted in The Cleaners
Like a warm sweet nostalgic
Posted on Sun, 05 Jul 2015
Like a warm sweet nostalgic hug. A beautiful journey from envy to satisfaction and wistful maturity.
Read full commentPosted in The Old House By The Sea
It's 4 am for me. Usually
Posted on Thu, 02 Jul 2015
It's 4 am for me. Usually when the kids wake up. When everyone else is asleep is when the thoughts start creeping in as you so powerfully described. It becomes a cycle which is highlighted so well by your structure and repeated time.
Read full commentPosted in A.M.
Love them! And all they
Posted on Fri, 03 Jul 2015
Love them! And all they thought they stood for!
Read full commentPosted in The Wedding Picture
You have some wonderfully
Posted on Fri, 03 Jul 2015
You have some wonderfully crafted lines in here. The reader moves from tiny detail to sweeping overview quite smoothly.
Needs some proof reading in areas such as '...few hours back. So that I cou...' and '...I did not even got the time...
Read full commentPosted in Goodbyes
Great frosty, sharp and
Posted on Fri, 03 Jul 2015
Great frosty, sharp and tingling imagery created here.
Read full commentPosted in the return of summer
A massive round of applause
Posted on Thu, 02 Jul 2015
A massive round of applause from me! Well constructed and, as a teacher, I applaud the conceit. We do try to build in life experience but when keeping the school doors open means getting an exam result we are all put through the exam machine...
Read full commentPosted in High School Sweethearts
I was at first put off by the
Posted on Wed, 01 Jul 2015
I was at first put off by the amount of punctuation but after a few reads I now realise it adds to the ebb and flow very nicely. A very enjoyable rhythm.
Read full commentPosted in The ebbing tide
This is lovely, delicate
Posted on Wed, 27 May 2015
This is lovely, delicate story-telling. The subtle mysteries draw us in and the imagery anchors us there. Lovely work!
Read full commentPosted in Notes from a Dirt Engineer - Old Apple Trees
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