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| Story | Teen Training! | Rhiannonw | 10 | 7 years 10 months ago |
| Story | Before The Cake | Lou Blodgett | 2 | 7 years 10 months ago |
| Story | What I Learned | Richard L. Prov... | 3 | 7 years 10 months ago |
| Story | When A Father Leaves | Chessnut Eyes | 1 | 7 years 10 months ago |
| Story | On the steps | Pingles | 4 | 7 years 10 months ago |
| Story | Where I Belong | D Marie | 3 | 7 years 10 months ago |
| Story | The Love Addict | H. B. Woodrose | 2 | 7 years 10 months ago |
| Story | The Worst Part .. | va-nessa | 1 | 7 years 10 months ago |
| Story | Breaking The Silence | D Marie | 9 | 7 years 10 months ago |
| Story | End of the World | Rishire | 4 | 7 years 10 months ago |
| Story | Murder at the Feast, The Treachery of Scone | Angusfolklore | 3 | 7 years 10 months ago |
| Story | This Beeston Morning | ralph | 6 | 7 years 10 months ago |
| Story | Them | london_calling79 | 4 | 7 years 10 months ago |
| Story | HD | pepsoid | 2 | 7 years 10 months ago |
| Story | Romance Killer | socialeaf | 15 | 7 years 10 months ago |
| Story | Calvary | mcscraic | 2 | 7 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Nothing's Happening | Jane Hyphen | 10 | 7 years 12 months ago |
| Story | Collaboration | bosch | 8 | 7 years 12 months ago |
| Story | Angela | jem | 5 | 8 years 1 week ago |
| Story | My Ol' Man's Freezer Video | hudsonmoon | 10 | 8 years 1 week ago |
| Story | The Hearts Of Politicians | well-wisher | 2 | 8 years 2 weeks ago |
| Story | Black Cross (Chapter Seven) | Voodoun Romance | 2 | 8 years 2 weeks ago |
| Story | The Curious Lamentation of Daisy Namatjira | Petrice | 2 | 8 years 2 weeks ago |
| Story | god and mothers (a rambling) | iwylie | 5 | 8 years 2 weeks ago |
| Story | On this day the 7th of April | Poette | 3 | 8 years 2 weeks ago |






But the more she needed
Posted on Sat, 11 Jul 2015
But the more she needed josticks, whale songs and candles in the bath, the more I needed the likes of Barbie Is A Slut.
A wonderful line to underline the falling apart. I've been there - sick of the up your own arses and wanting to re-...
Read full commentPosted in Grown Man Cries In The Bahamas Chapter One
Yet love
Posted on Fri, 10 Jul 2015
Yet love
was like a light flurry of snow
never deep enough to lay new paths
What a stunning image a gorgeous poem.
Read full commentPosted in Fleeting fantasies
A beautifully described
Posted on Fri, 10 Jul 2015
A beautifully described falling apart. Hermetically sealed, clipped up and washed down with antibiotics.
Read full commentPosted in The Cleaners
Like a warm sweet nostalgic
Posted on Sun, 05 Jul 2015
Like a warm sweet nostalgic hug. A beautiful journey from envy to satisfaction and wistful maturity.
Read full commentPosted in The Old House By The Sea
It's 4 am for me. Usually
Posted on Thu, 02 Jul 2015
It's 4 am for me. Usually when the kids wake up. When everyone else is asleep is when the thoughts start creeping in as you so powerfully described. It becomes a cycle which is highlighted so well by your structure and repeated time.
Read full commentPosted in A.M.
Love them! And all they
Posted on Fri, 03 Jul 2015
Love them! And all they thought they stood for!
Read full commentPosted in The Wedding Picture
You have some wonderfully
Posted on Fri, 03 Jul 2015
You have some wonderfully crafted lines in here. The reader moves from tiny detail to sweeping overview quite smoothly.
Needs some proof reading in areas such as '...few hours back. So that I cou...' and '...I did not even got the time...
Read full commentPosted in Goodbyes
Great frosty, sharp and
Posted on Fri, 03 Jul 2015
Great frosty, sharp and tingling imagery created here.
Read full commentPosted in the return of summer
A massive round of applause
Posted on Thu, 02 Jul 2015
A massive round of applause from me! Well constructed and, as a teacher, I applaud the conceit. We do try to build in life experience but when keeping the school doors open means getting an exam result we are all put through the exam machine...
Read full commentPosted in High School Sweethearts
I was at first put off by the
Posted on Wed, 01 Jul 2015
I was at first put off by the amount of punctuation but after a few reads I now realise it adds to the ebb and flow very nicely. A very enjoyable rhythm.
Read full commentPosted in The ebbing tide
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