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| Story | The meeting - good friends | Parson Thru | 8 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | A MESSAGE | Alice Hamilton | 4 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | LOST IN WATER | YaseminB | 2 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Hot Diggity Dog! A Craven Danger Mystery | hudsonmoon | 7 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | iGrasshopper | iDrew | 1 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Folk tale | Caldwell | 4 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Crackle and Hum | paborama | 2 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | The Language of The Leaves | Caldwell | 2 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Mirror World | PoetonaHill | 20 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Is God your problem or ‘Christians’? | Rhiannonw | 2 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Breakfast in the sun | Parson Thru | 2 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Time, people and things | Parson Thru | 7 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Rivulets | TheShyAssassin | 1 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Gone to the dogs | Pink Lady | 1 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Penumbra | Zabeth | 1 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Reality Has a Face | Richard L. Prov... | 2 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Take It Easy - Message from a Sitting President (with vocals) | hudsonmoon | 3 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Mad Poetry - Poem Three | Suchitra Manpuri | 6 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Mad Poetry - Poem Two | Suchitra Manpuri | 6 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Purple | YaseminB | 3 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Silence is Night | Richard L. Prov... | 5 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | We are so tired | sid | 10 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Breaking Away | YaseminB | 3 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Today's TV | Terrence Oblong | 8 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | A Mood | francisraymonda... | 2 | 7 years 2 months ago |
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Belfast Boun (Poetry Monthly)
The bricks they may bleed and the rain it may weep And the damp Lagan fog lulls the city to sleep. It's to Hell with the future, we'll live in the past May the Lord in his mercy be kind to Belfast. Maurice James Craig
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Winter child
Away from the leafed through house and far from the stale, bitumen thrum of traffic crush we curl back into the womb of the earth. Topping the brow...
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Grow up or give up.
We all make mistakes. I'm not sure of this is one of them.
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Dogs
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‘I want you to sleep with me.’
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The Body Politic
Rodin's forgotten son
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Sure footed internal rhyme
Posted on Sat, 13 Feb 2016
Sure footed internal rhyme used so well throughout until the lack of it emphasises the cold hard ending. Pitch perfect vignette.
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The angel's in the details.
Posted on Wed, 13 Jan 2016
The angel's in the details. Lovely piece.
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Full of stunning, standout
Posted on Mon, 08 Feb 2016
Full of stunning, standout lines but by no means just those - a wonderful atmosphere I just can't touch. You move from claustrophobia to expanse in a few short words.
Read full commentPosted in Karelia (Poetry Monthly)
Your structure and short
Posted on Sat, 06 Feb 2016
Your structure and short lines work well here. Effective. Not sure 'deaths ordain' works and shouldn't there be some apostrophes? The ending is strong though.
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I love the little world of
Posted on Sat, 23 Jan 2016
I love the little world of this. Very well chosen images which develop the conceit. 'Unlearned like spellings' is one of my favourites.
Read full commentPosted in Never forget smoking
There's a wonderful depth and
Posted on Sat, 23 Jan 2016
There's a wonderful depth and weight to your lines. I wonder if it would be punchier if you were to remove some verbs and prepositions such as 'are, which, where' etc. May shorten the lines without impacting on the meaning - making it starker....
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Beautiful, original images of
Posted on Fri, 22 Jan 2016
Beautiful, original images of pork, spongy wood and sulphur flags. The 'until' in line 5 jars a bit but can't explain why. Well crafted.
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Harsh and bleak.
Posted on Fri, 22 Jan 2016
Harsh and bleak. Cold and frigid. I loved the hardiness of the buzzards 'winning'. A final nail.
I thought in these lines that the focus was less intense. Possibly that 'bows' already hints at deference so no need to repeat.
'Grass...
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This is a great teaser!
Posted on Tue, 08 Sep 2015
This is a great teaser!
Read full commentPosted in Nothing About Nothing
You have a real skill for
Posted on Sun, 15 Nov 2015
You have a real skill for blunt, expressive prose. Can be a little overcooked at times I feel. You may need some softer moments to avoid it verging on parody. Great style - reminiscent of Ludlum or Lee Child, even Wilbur Smith before he went...
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