Calban endures life in the very dull, and very efficient world of the Martan Empire and Gallanol, in which business, work and human life have been moulded into a soulless state of perfection. But is it perfection for the bored and miserable workers who work in its dull life controlling economy?
These are good pieces, well
Posted on Tue, 19 Jun 2018
These are good pieces, well written and intelligent visions of the future!
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You have brought your
Posted on Fri, 14 Nov 2025
You have brought your memories of Glasgow in 1978 to life. I enjoyed reading this, a great way for us to peer into someone's life and past! My mother had Australian friends who lived in Glasgow at that time, and I remember visiting for Christmas...
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A very touching tale, and so
Posted on Fri, 12 Sep 2025
A very touching tale, and so sad in the way Caweys disappeared and your lead character will never see him again. You describe the tensions and arguments which exist about immigration, and particularly the current 'boat' people, and the...
Read full commentPosted in The Boy with the Rubik’s Cube
A very intelligent and subtle
Posted on Sat, 27 Sep 2025
A very intelligent and subtle look at the question of finding the secrets to eternal life for a dictator. This scientist certainly used his intelligence too. It reminded me a little of 'Arabian Nights' too. Well done!
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Well thanks Maxine! I didn't
Posted on Wed, 17 Sep 2025
Well thanks Maxine! I didn't really know him either until his death, but there was so much speculation and discussion about him over the last week and a half, on facebook, You Tube, and Threads, that I have certainly learned a lot more about him...
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I have caught up with reading
Posted on Mon, 15 Sep 2025
I have caught up with reading this unfolding story again, and am certainly enjopying it. The tornado reminds me a bit of the young lady in Wizard of Oz (now I have remembered her name a minute later - Dorothy) getting wizzed off towards the...
Read full commentPosted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (8)
An interesting article on the
Posted on Wed, 17 Sep 2025
An interesting article on the people whose deaths have created a very big media 'splash', and the covid outbreak which also had such an intense effect on us all and virtually took over the media for so long. Charlie Kirk's death has become...
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You make some good points
Posted on Sat, 06 Sep 2025
You make some good points there. Trump does nothing for the causes of peace, or for the People. He and his 'coalition' of interests seem to want war and hatred, and while they are in power there will be no real peace!
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A very varied set of
Posted on Mon, 04 Aug 2025
A very varied set of interests are revealed by your diary, so much so that i will not even attempt to comment on all of them, but certainly an amusing and enjoyable read. I particularly enjoyed your list of items which are even Hotter Than July...
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I am enjoying the story.
Posted on Tue, 19 Aug 2025
I am enjoying the story. Billy certainly seems fated to get to know Danielle better now. I shall not speculate too much right now, but perhaps he has some important role coming up.
You certainly make me want to visit Brean Down some day....
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