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Mudbath! (The Ultimate Day Trip Of All Possible Day Trips!) by Alfred N. Muggins (from his recent holiday in Marmaris, Turkey!) Part 1
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16/5/22 They were told this would be the tour of tours! They would wash in the sacred mud, and presumably, Alfred assumed, they would be rejuvenated...
Liz had dreams of living in a Tax Free World! Part 3 By Alfred N.Muggins
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17/10/22 Alfred stumbled over the meaning of ‘Growth’. There was only one way! It was up! Liz had only ever gone upwards before, even if she had had...
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Liz had dreams of living in a Tax Free World! Part 2 By Alfred N.Muggins
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14/10/22 / 17/10/22 She wanted to get us up off our backsides, and go out to do longer shifts. It sounded like a good idea. Gross domestic Product...
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The Cosmonaut’s Last Journey (It’s All Over Now) by Alfred N.Muggins
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4/7/22 Forlorn he looks out of his rocket window, His people no longer love him, They have seen through the thin veneer of his lies. Now they know...
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Liz had dreams of living in a Tax Free World! Part 1 By Alfred N.Muggins
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14/10/22 / 17/10/22 Liz had dreams of living in a tax free world where Public Services were just there and didn’t have to be paid for! Most things...
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I like the simple and direct
Posted on Thu, 26 Nov 2015
I like the simple and direct message and delivery of this poem.
Read full commentPosted in 25/11/2015
Your story is developing well
Posted on Thu, 06 Feb 2014
Your story is developing well with surprising twists. There was no explanation of why she chose to awake or use Antares. How did she know about this demon? It might be worth including a sentence or two on these questions.
Read full commentAlso I think it...
Posted in Euphoria Blake: Infernally Divine
A promising story, encourages
Posted on Thu, 06 Feb 2014
A promising story, encourages me to read further. I do think that second long paragraph needs breaking up into smaller paragraphs. You have the mother's disappearance and the father's death both in the same paragraph, but they are different...
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