David Kirtley

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StoryNew Inventions! (Maybe The Past Was Better?) by Mr A.N.Muggins David Kirtley22 years 9 months ago
StoryThe Myth of Olympians Ewan32 years 9 months ago
StoryPenalties marandina152 years 9 months ago
StoryNo Cream in the Carbonara luigi_pagano102 years 9 months ago
StoryThe Sure Yank Redemption marandina162 years 9 months ago
StoryRemember Me As I Was. celticman112 years 9 months ago
StoryThe Colours Of Life mcscraic62 years 9 months ago
StoryMore Thoughts About Biscuits and History! (An Aid To The History and Geography of Europe (and particularly Scotland and France)) by Mr Alfred N.Muggins David Kirtley52 years 9 months ago
StoryWebWorld (1.8) rosaliekempthorne12 years 9 months ago
StoryMost Vial marandina182 years 9 months ago
StoryFootsteps on Mars marandina292 years 9 months ago
StoryThe Last Elephant marandina262 years 10 months ago
StoryTime Travel To The Time Of Good Old King Henry : Auld England Was Green! (Land Of Greensleeves) by A.N.Muggins David Kirtley22 years 10 months ago
StoryRoy Batty (Tears in Rain) marandina242 years 10 months ago
StoryThe Martians Have Landed luigi_pagano102 years 10 months ago
StoryEstival Solstice marandina182 years 10 months ago
StoryMr A.N.Muggins Gets Criticized For Thinking Openly About The World's Problems (Without Having A Clear Plan) David Kirtley32 years 10 months ago
StoryWhen the Penny Drops Schubert52 years 10 months ago
StoryRecent Invasions Of Scotland by Alfred.N.Muggins David Kirtley22 years 10 months ago
StoryDon't You Forget About Me (Talent) 1 David Kirtley12 years 10 months ago
StoryA Small Treatise Upon Scottish Culture (Just To Put A Few Demons To Rest) by Mr A.N.Muggins David Kirtley32 years 10 months ago
StoryBombs Away! drkevin12 years 10 months ago
StoryA Riot of Colours (edited) luigi_pagano142 years 10 months ago
StoryThe Banquet (Competition entry max 1,000 words) marandina82 years 11 months ago
StoryThe Internet Is Finally Restored (By An Angel) by Alfred N.Muggins David Kirtley32 years 11 months ago

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Turkish Hotels : Socialist Paradise? By Alfred N.Muggins

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12/5/22 Even the Hotel, the pool area and the Bar areas were like a Socialist Paradise, thought Alfred! There were plenty of staff in the hotels, he...
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Inside the Mind Of Vladimir Putin by Mr Alfred N.Muggins

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16/3/22 (Potentate Putin, Comrade KGB, The Terrorist President, The Last Czar of Russia (who has now definitely superceded Nicholas Romanov II, who...

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180 of my comments have received 186 Great Feedback votes

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The human body, and mind, is

Posted on Thu, 28 Feb 2019

The human body, and mind, is a miracle of nature. You have expressed it well here.

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Posted in Speedy Connections

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I did enjoy this piece. The

Posted on Tue, 01 Jan 2019

I did enjoy this piece. The difficulties of modern life and the worries of unforeseen health issues were well explained.

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Posted in Help For Hero's.

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Very appropriate I think to

Posted on Sun, 11 Nov 2018

Very appropriate I think to bring these issues together on Remembrance Day. I enjoyed and was interested to read the tales of the lives of your grandfather and father with the subject of homelessness which so often seems to afflict veterans and...

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Posted in Remembering isn't enough ...

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Very funny. I enjoyed that!

Posted on Tue, 19 Jun 2018

Very funny. I enjoyed that!

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Posted in Britney and Shania

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Thanks for your comment Elsie

Posted on Fri, 29 Dec 2017

Thanks for your comment Elsie. I agree we seem to have moved forward from the clinical academic marking exercise approach to literary criticism, which has got to be good news. I think we give more of a personal response now on abctales....

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Posted in Have We Written Too Much?

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Good piece, very effective.

Posted on Fri, 16 Dec 2016

Good piece, very effective.

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Posted in subjected/ subjugated

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I like the simple and direct

Posted on Thu, 26 Nov 2015

I like the simple and direct message and delivery of this poem.

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Posted in 25/11/2015

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Your story is developing well

Posted on Thu, 06 Feb 2014

Your story is developing well with surprising twists. There was no explanation of why she chose to awake or use Antares. How did she know about this demon? It might be worth including a sentence or two on these questions.
Also I think it...

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Posted in Euphoria Blake: Infernally Divine

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A promising story, encourages

Posted on Thu, 06 Feb 2014

A promising story, encourages me to read further. I do think that second long paragraph needs breaking up into smaller paragraphs. You have the mother's disappearance and the father's death both in the same paragraph, but they are different...

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