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Most of us don't expect
Posted on Wed, 24 Mar 2021
Most of us don't expect employers to be perfect, in living up to legislations and commitments, but the kind of employers that put blame on their staff for there own shortcomings are pretty despicable. They should be publicised and their behaviour...
I really enjoyed this short story. I thought it was a clever and relevant idea, and well put together, with a bit of fun! So watch out fellow writers. Keep writing or another writer might do this to you in his or her plot!
I did enjoy reading this, not that I am usually too keen on a lot of swearing, but it is often very appropriate and hard hitting in the right place. Here it suits the character perfectly, a very dramatic and extreme character, who nonetheless...
I have enjoyed your poem. It is a great poem, expressing our desires to explore all the books and films etc in our rich culture, which we are normally too busy to explore. The sense of our society having spoiled many of its opportunities and...
Most of us don't expect
Posted on Wed, 24 Mar 2021
Most of us don't expect employers to be perfect, in living up to legislations and commitments, but the kind of employers that put blame on their staff for there own shortcomings are pretty despicable. They should be publicised and their behaviour...
Read full commentPosted in Pad Life 15: Princess and the Crone
I really enjoyed this short
Posted on Mon, 15 Feb 2021
I really enjoyed this short story. I thought it was a clever and relevant idea, and well put together, with a bit of fun! So watch out fellow writers. Keep writing or another writer might do this to you in his or her plot!
Read full commentPosted in The Banquet (Competition entry max 1,000 words)
I enjoyed reading this! You
Posted on Thu, 03 Dec 2020
I enjoyed reading this! You make the point very well, that perhaps we should all be more careful, until this virus threat is over!
Read full commentPosted in I Was So Close To Taking It Off.......................
Great piece, relevant and
Posted on Sun, 25 Oct 2020
Great piece, relevant and uplifting!
Read full commentPosted in Thanks For the Memory
Good thoughtful and caring
Posted on Sun, 20 Sep 2020
Good thoughtful and caring poem! I enjoyed reading it.
Read full commentPosted in Worlds Apart
An ordinary day turns into
Posted on Fri, 07 Aug 2020
An ordinary day turns into something very dramatic. Darren has so much rage! Very well done!
Read full commentPosted in No Eagles Allowed
What a sad series of events,
Posted on Fri, 17 Jul 2020
What a sad series of events, but very gripping. I really didn't think it would end so sadly! So much for helping others! Very effective.
Read full commentPosted in The Things We Do for Love
I did enjoy reading this, not
Posted on Tue, 07 Jul 2020
I did enjoy reading this, not that I am usually too keen on a lot of swearing, but it is often very appropriate and hard hitting in the right place. Here it suits the character perfectly, a very dramatic and extreme character, who nonetheless...
Read full commentPosted in Not too Much to Ask
I have enjoyed your poem. It
Posted on Mon, 13 Apr 2020
I have enjoyed your poem. It is a great poem, expressing our desires to explore all the books and films etc in our rich culture, which we are normally too busy to explore. The sense of our society having spoiled many of its opportunities and...
Read full commentPosted in Singing in Lockdown
Interesting anecdote! You
Posted on Sun, 12 Apr 2020
Interesting anecdote! You were well rewarded for your caring assistance it seems. Well done!
Read full commentPosted in Mary.
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