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Liz had dreams of living in a Tax Free World! Part 3 By Alfred N.Muggins
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17/10/22 Alfred stumbled over the meaning of ‘Growth’. There was only one way! It was up! Liz had only ever gone upwards before, even if she had had...
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Liz had dreams of living in a Tax Free World! Part 2 By Alfred N.Muggins
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14/10/22 / 17/10/22 She wanted to get us up off our backsides, and go out to do longer shifts. It sounded like a good idea. Gross domestic Product...
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The Cosmonaut’s Last Journey (It’s All Over Now) by Alfred N.Muggins
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4/7/22 Forlorn he looks out of his rocket window, His people no longer love him, They have seen through the thin veneer of his lies. Now they know...
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Liz had dreams of living in a Tax Free World! Part 1 By Alfred N.Muggins
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14/10/22 / 17/10/22 Liz had dreams of living in a tax free world where Public Services were just there and didn’t have to be paid for! Most things...
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Where Art Thou James Bond? By Alfred N.Muggins
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15/5/22 Unfortunately James Bond had apparently just been killed off in his last film (although Alfred had not seen it yet, and probably would not...
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Great piece! You have created
Posted on Fri, 13 Dec 2019
Great piece! You have created your atmosphere of defeat or disenchantment so well.
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You have described the story
Posted on Thu, 05 Dec 2019
You have described the story in a very effective, easy to understand way, which I like. This story appeals to most of us modern minded people, who perhaps partly due to the teachings of Jesus, feel able to make our own choices and do not wish to...
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I enjoyed this! Very readable
Posted on Thu, 14 Nov 2019
I enjoyed this! Very readable, and I can empathise with its humility and sense of not making too much of a difference. I like the way you create the sense of decline in the disappearing city.
Read full commentPosted in When I was a poet (After David Meltzer)
Well really if the land is
Posted on Fri, 08 Nov 2019
Well really if the land is holy ground, or church land, the police should have the power to move the travellers off. If the law is not able to be enforced then it will be made a mockery of. Hopefully there are places the travellers are allowed to...
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I doubt there are anything
Posted on Fri, 08 Nov 2019
I doubt there are anything like enough policemen and women to police a firework ban. It would be quite ineffective, unless they stop the sale of them?
Read full commentPosted in Pets And Fireworks.
Great piece! The slightly
Posted on Tue, 05 Nov 2019
Great piece! The slightly rambling way you describe events with the unexpected final sign of the cross is very effective!
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I enjoyed this and the style
Posted on Fri, 08 Nov 2019
I enjoyed this and the style in which you write it. The natural debate which goes on in the hearts of modern christians when something like this happens! But maybe the congregation is just too easily pushed over?
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Very funny! You seem to know
Posted on Sat, 20 Apr 2019
Very funny! You seem to know exactly what the characters might have said if they were in a comedy slapstick instead of Game of Thrones!
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An amusing way of
Posted on Fri, 19 Apr 2019
An amusing way of interpreting the characters in Game of Thrones! I enjoyed that.
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The human body, and mind, is
Posted on Thu, 28 Feb 2019
The human body, and mind, is a miracle of nature. You have expressed it well here.
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