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Magical Mystery Tour Part 5 : Mission Accomplished (Into the Liverpool Docklands!) by Alfred N.Muggins Section 2
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6/7/22 Eagerly Alfred and Mrs Muggins’ son, and their little dog ventured out of the multistorey car park into the sacred city, to be met by some...
Magical Mystery Tour Part 5 : Mission Accomplished (Into the Liverpool Docklands!) by Alfred N.Muggins Section 1
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23/2/22 Alfred and Mrs Muggins’ son, and their little dog, who they had brought all the way with them so he wouldn’t be left at home on his own, were...
There’s A Whole Lotta Karaoke Goin’ On (In The Turkish Hotel Restaurant!) by Alfred N.Muggins
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15/5/22 Alfred yearned for more rock’n’roll! They were playing too much dance and hip hop and modern stuff at the hotel poolside! (and amongst the...
Knights Of the Keyboard To the Defence of Ukraine (Part 2) by Alfred N.Muggins
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5 th of April 2022 Be careful those of us who wish to use Facebook to counter the Russian paid ‘Trolls’, who seem to be operating on the comments to...
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Knights Of the Keyboard To the Defence of Ukraine (Part 1) by Alfred N.Muggins
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4/4/22 (edited and added to up to 24/4/22) Alfred commented in response to a possible (i.e. very likely) Russian Paid Troll on Facebook on a...
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Good piece, very effective.
Posted on Fri, 16 Dec 2016
Good piece, very effective.
Read full commentPosted in subjected/ subjugated
I like the simple and direct
Posted on Thu, 26 Nov 2015
I like the simple and direct message and delivery of this poem.
Read full commentPosted in 25/11/2015
Your story is developing well
Posted on Thu, 06 Feb 2014
Your story is developing well with surprising twists. There was no explanation of why she chose to awake or use Antares. How did she know about this demon? It might be worth including a sentence or two on these questions.
Read full commentAlso I think it...
Posted in Euphoria Blake: Infernally Divine
A promising story, encourages
Posted on Thu, 06 Feb 2014
A promising story, encourages me to read further. I do think that second long paragraph needs breaking up into smaller paragraphs. You have the mother's disappearance and the father's death both in the same paragraph, but they are different...
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