6/5/23 Westminster Abbey Part 1 Thanks to family phone calls (unwanted by Alfred at this magical time of Coronation, but there was absolutely no way...
Monday 16/1/23 (written 18/1/23, 4/2/23, 24/4/23) After a trying intense day at the new job, which had proved a lot more difficult than he thought it...
Great poem summarising a scene which does seem very moving, after looking at it on your link. I may have seen it before, but had forgotten. This idea of an android with a conscience, and a memory, but nonetheless a job to do, is very powerful! He...
I will definitely check the current self government status of Scotland prior to my next visit to Scotland! and make sure I can still trust my associates. I did enjoy this wild satirical very current political story!
I did enjoy this one Marandina. Your comic satire is very up to date, and very funny. Ursula would like to be nice but has to use the methods at her disposal. Boris seems to ride through every crisis intact, but how many lives has he got left?...
A fitting description of the piece and of the event. I like Stravinsky, and I always thought the Russians created a lot of the best 'classical' music! Now I have read this I must listen to the famous piece again!
Most of us don't expect employers to be perfect, in living up to legislations and commitments, but the kind of employers that put blame on their staff for there own shortcomings are pretty despicable. They should be publicised and their behaviour...
I really enjoyed this short story. I thought it was a clever and relevant idea, and well put together, with a bit of fun! So watch out fellow writers. Keep writing or another writer might do this to you in his or her plot!
Hilarious! Did this really
Posted on Tue, 13 Jul 2021
Hilarious! Did this really happen? In a school? Very funny, and great characters. Is it based on real memories or characters?
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I enjoyed your impression of
Posted on Mon, 21 Jun 2021
I enjoyed your impression of Stonehenge, and its significance. Very fitting!
Read full commentPosted in Estival Solstice
Great poem summarising a
Posted on Tue, 01 Jun 2021
Great poem summarising a scene which does seem very moving, after looking at it on your link. I may have seen it before, but had forgotten. This idea of an android with a conscience, and a memory, but nonetheless a job to do, is very powerful! He...
Read full commentPosted in Roy Batty (Tears in Rain)
I will definitely check the
Posted on Tue, 25 May 2021
I will definitely check the current self government status of Scotland prior to my next visit to Scotland! and make sure I can still trust my associates. I did enjoy this wild satirical very current political story!
Read full commentPosted in The Sure Yank Redemption
Good poem! You deal with some
Posted on Wed, 12 May 2021
Good poem! You deal with some very profound and difficult issues, and express your feelings very well.
Read full commentPosted in The Last Elephant
I enjoyed your poem. It is a
Posted on Tue, 27 Apr 2021
I enjoyed your poem. It is a good journey of the imagination, even if it is not, or never becomes real! Well imagined!
Read full commentPosted in Footsteps on Mars
I did enjoy this one
Posted on Wed, 21 Apr 2021
I did enjoy this one Marandina. Your comic satire is very up to date, and very funny. Ursula would like to be nice but has to use the methods at her disposal. Boris seems to ride through every crisis intact, but how many lives has he got left?...
Read full commentPosted in Most Vial
A fitting description of the
Posted on Wed, 07 Apr 2021
A fitting description of the piece and of the event. I like Stravinsky, and I always thought the Russians created a lot of the best 'classical' music! Now I have read this I must listen to the famous piece again!
Read full commentPosted in The Riot of Spring (Pictures of Pagan Russia 1913)
Most of us don't expect
Posted on Wed, 24 Mar 2021
Most of us don't expect employers to be perfect, in living up to legislations and commitments, but the kind of employers that put blame on their staff for there own shortcomings are pretty despicable. They should be publicised and their behaviour...
Read full commentPosted in Pad Life 15: Princess and the Crone
I really enjoyed this short
Posted on Mon, 15 Feb 2021
I really enjoyed this short story. I thought it was a clever and relevant idea, and well put together, with a bit of fun! So watch out fellow writers. Keep writing or another writer might do this to you in his or her plot!
Read full commentPosted in The Banquet (Competition entry max 1,000 words)
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