Monday 16/1/23 (written 18/1/23, 4/2/23, 24/4/23) After a trying intense day at the new job, which had proved a lot more difficult than he thought it...
1/4/23 Easter is rebirth All things may grow again, Irrepressible nature, Cannot be held down. There is more living than dying, The defeat of winter...
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Great poem! You have found a
Posted on Wed, 08 Apr 2020
Great poem! You have found a different angle on the virus crisis. How will this distancing and isolation affect us? You have raised some interesting ideas!
Interesting dilemma, well explained. Policies will vary, but in today's circumstances it does seem safer to wear a mask, for the protection of ourselves, and others. I don't have a mask myself (yet) but it does seem sensible for many situations....
In my opinion this is a really good poem about the issues, particularly the social isolation/distancing and discipline issues, brought up by the coronovirus crisis. You say so much which is really relevant, and have some interesting perspectives...
You have described the story in a very effective, easy to understand way, which I like. This story appeals to most of us modern minded people, who perhaps partly due to the teachings of Jesus, feel able to make our own choices and do not wish to...
I enjoyed this! Very readable, and I can empathise with its humility and sense of not making too much of a difference. I like the way you create the sense of decline in the disappearing city.
Well really if the land is holy ground, or church land, the police should have the power to move the travellers off. If the law is not able to be enforced then it will be made a mockery of. Hopefully there are places the travellers are allowed to...
I enjoyed this and the style in which you write it. The natural debate which goes on in the hearts of modern christians when something like this happens! But maybe the congregation is just too easily pushed over?
Great poem! You have found a
Posted on Wed, 08 Apr 2020
Great poem! You have found a different angle on the virus crisis. How will this distancing and isolation affect us? You have raised some interesting ideas!
Read full commentPosted in Igniting the Ignorant
Interesting dilemma, well
Posted on Wed, 01 Apr 2020
Interesting dilemma, well explained. Policies will vary, but in today's circumstances it does seem safer to wear a mask, for the protection of ourselves, and others. I don't have a mask myself (yet) but it does seem sensible for many situations....
Read full commentPosted in Choices.
In my opinion this is a
Posted on Fri, 27 Mar 2020
In my opinion this is a really good poem about the issues, particularly the social isolation/distancing and discipline issues, brought up by the coronovirus crisis. You say so much which is really relevant, and have some interesting perspectives...
Read full commentPosted in Lockdown
You have described the story
Posted on Thu, 05 Dec 2019
You have described the story in a very effective, easy to understand way, which I like. This story appeals to most of us modern minded people, who perhaps partly due to the teachings of Jesus, feel able to make our own choices and do not wish to...
Read full commentPosted in Let Him Who Is Without Sin Cast The First Stone.
I enjoyed this! Very readable
Posted on Thu, 14 Nov 2019
I enjoyed this! Very readable, and I can empathise with its humility and sense of not making too much of a difference. I like the way you create the sense of decline in the disappearing city.
Read full commentPosted in When I was a poet (After David Meltzer)
Well really if the land is
Posted on Fri, 08 Nov 2019
Well really if the land is holy ground, or church land, the police should have the power to move the travellers off. If the law is not able to be enforced then it will be made a mockery of. Hopefully there are places the travellers are allowed to...
Read full commentPosted in Two Gods.
I doubt there are anything
Posted on Fri, 08 Nov 2019
I doubt there are anything like enough policemen and women to police a firework ban. It would be quite ineffective, unless they stop the sale of them?
Read full commentPosted in Pets And Fireworks.
Great piece! The slightly
Posted on Tue, 05 Nov 2019
Great piece! The slightly rambling way you describe events with the unexpected final sign of the cross is very effective!
Read full commentPosted in The Tent Of Meeting.
I enjoyed this and the style
Posted on Fri, 08 Nov 2019
I enjoyed this and the style in which you write it. The natural debate which goes on in the hearts of modern christians when something like this happens! But maybe the congregation is just too easily pushed over?
Read full commentPosted in Two Gods.
Very funny! You seem to know
Posted on Sat, 20 Apr 2019
Very funny! You seem to know exactly what the characters might have said if they were in a comedy slapstick instead of Game of Thrones!
Read full commentPosted in Game of Moans 6: ‘Hand’
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