David Kirtley

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StoryA Riot of Colours (edited) luigi_pagano144 years 3 months ago
StoryThe Banquet (Competition entry max 1,000 words) marandina84 years 3 months ago
StoryThe Internet Is Finally Restored (By An Angel) by Alfred N.Muggins David Kirtley34 years 3 months ago
StoryGolden Memories: Toybox #2 drkevin14 years 3 months ago
StoryGolden Memories: Another Weird Guy drkevin14 years 3 months ago
StoryMr A.Muggins Goes Back To The 20th Century To Kidnap Mrs Thatcher For Auld Henry VIII David Kirtley34 years 3 months ago
Blog entrySaved by a Stranger, BBC 2, BBC iPlayer, Presenter Anita Rani and Director Toby Trackman. celticman24 years 3 months ago
StoryThe Riot of Spring (Pictures of Pagan Russia 1913) marandina134 years 3 months ago
StoryElections During Lockdown luigi_pagano44 years 4 months ago
StoryTime Travel to the Time of Good Old King Henry : Meeting Henry by Mr Alfred N.Muggins David Kirtley34 years 4 months ago
StorySooz celticman104 years 4 months ago
StoryApocryphon Ewan14 years 4 months ago
StoryBefore We Kissed Goodnight skinner_jennifer174 years 4 months ago
StoryHenry VIII : Tyrantosaurus Rex : An Exceedingly Short Novel By Mr Alfred N.Muggins David Kirtley44 years 4 months ago
Blog entryMarita Conlon-McKenna (1990 [2017]) Under the Hawthorn Tree. celticman34 years 4 months ago
StoryMr Alfred Muggins' Small Melodrama In The Kitchen David Kirtley14 years 4 months ago
StoryI Had A Dream (Pradski's Adventures In The Russian Revolution) by A.N.Muggins David Kirtley14 years 4 months ago
StoryThe end of the Romanovs valiswaverider34 years 4 months ago
StoryThis Noose Around My Neck randy-johnson14 years 4 months ago
StoryLittering in the Time of the New National Labour Government (It's Cleanup Time!) : Part 4 David Kirtley14 years 4 months ago
StoryLittering in the Time of the New National Labour Government (It's Cleanup Time!) : Part 2 David Kirtley54 years 5 months ago
StoryLittering in the Time of the New National Labour Government (It's Cleanup Time!) : Part 1 David Kirtley24 years 5 months ago
StoryLittering in the Time of the New National Labour Government (It's Cleanup Time!) : Part 3 David Kirtley14 years 5 months ago
StoryThe bomb that fell on 37 Everson Terrace Terrence Oblong54 years 5 months ago
StoryThank God It's Good Friday! (and April Fools) By Alfred N.Muggins David Kirtley34 years 5 months ago

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A promising story, encourages

Posted on Thu, 06 Feb 2014

A promising story, encourages me to read further. I do think that second long paragraph needs breaking up into smaller paragraphs. You have the mother's disappearance and the father's death both in the same paragraph, but they are different...

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